This story is extremely well done. The writing style is easy to follow along with, I rarely ran into any place where I had to go back and reread a part to figure out what was going on. This is a major plus in my opinion, and sets this novel head-and-shoulders above some of it's competition. Similarly, the grammar is mostly correct, and the author was quick to make any corrections once they were pointed out. Since the novel is now completed, new readers shouldn't encounter any egregious grammatical errors.

This story is mostly written like a slice-of-life as it follows the main characters on their happy jaunt across the continent. Any problems that pop up are usually dealt with quickly and without much fuss, due mostly to the OPness of the main cast. If you're looking for heart pounding battles that keep you on the edge of your seat, look elsewhere.

The environments are described reasonably well, though personally I think some more attention to the details would have made things more enjoyable, this is just my preference. The action scenes, while largely brief, were given enough detailed descriptions to be engaging. Most battles, should they last long enough, were often accompanied by commentary from other characters or observing deities, I found this to be an interesting addition and it was often used to good effect in world building.

Most of the characters themselves seemed rather flat at first, but grew depth as the story progressed and the author fleshed out their personalities and backstories. Interactions between the main cast members are full of fluff and feelgoodness, friendly teasing between most and sugar filled flirting for the couples. Hostile or aggressive interactions are limited to other characters, most of whom don't reappear again after their role is over.

The only real gripe I might have is that the main cast are basically a bunch of uber-powered people who can solve any problem with basically no effort. The worst offender of this being Luna herself, as she seems to pick up new abilities during her journey with little effort. Though to Paytoe's credit she is shown working on said abilities before they become relevant, if they ever really do.

Overall, a solid feelgood read. I would recommend it to anyone not looking for something too serious.

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New Riryz

Status: epilogue

Sep 9, 2023

Alright, so this story was great!

Honestly the title and part of the description is not really an accurate description of what the story is about.

Spoiler for some explanation on what I meant with that with no real story spoilers, but better safe than sorry.

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So the betrayal part is not really a main point of the story. While it does get dealt with the main story is about the MC and friends going on an adventure, getting stronger and enjoying life. As for the 'genderbender' and 'goddess partner' situations, they are not actually forced things and were already accepted by the MC before reincarnating. The 'how' and 'why' gets explained pretty early in the story and the explanation for both these things makes sense. Its not like the MC is done dirty by everyone around. Its more of a fun and fluffy story actually.

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All in all, its a fairly lighthearted adventure story. Lots of fluff and its mainly just a chill adventure to the top while exploring interesting places and doing interesting things. Its a great story to just hang back and relax with compared to some serious/heavy stories. I recommend giving it a try.

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Michiru

Status: c31

Apr 24, 2022

Well I didn't really think I had a limit on fluff but after a certain point it's just annoying and boring. The dialogue between everybody Just seems fake and overwhelmingly cringy sometimes. It feels like I'm reading a script for a movie, if that makes sense.

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chriku18

Status: chapter 176

Aug 20, 2022

Good language, good grammar. Started strong, but the quality has dropped very much over the last hundred chapters. The story devolved from a LitRPG with content into a mess of unconnected pseudo-romantic scenes. Instead of fighting and tension, it is now a bland chain of the protagonists teleporting between the same locations and then touching each other's ears and tails. The growth of the main character has shifted from actions to gifts in the "authors notes" section, without the Characters doing any kind of work. On that topic: The actual content seems to shift from the main chapter to the notes, which often make out a third of the chapter and present the author directly interacting with the characters for plot convenience.

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LelouchEternal99

Status: chapter 26- aftermath and repercussions

Apr 1, 2022

It's pretty good but I've decided to drop it because

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of how the character reacts to certain things (tail touching.) Which would be fine if it were just "bad guys" but the way she reacts even when her friend does it on instinct

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Made me feel like that's a little over the top and harsh. If you disagree and think it's fine than please continue it's been great otherwise just that part that's bothered me.

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Bobple

Status: chapter 276- mio returns and...

Dec 7, 2022

The is story is very simple. It's built on the building blocks of fluffy moments, over powered cast, and doing whatever and going wherever they feel like doing/going.

It's fine. It's eating chips on the couch cause you want to relax kind of story. Near zero brain power needed, which is good for it's own reasons. I like the story and find it enjoyable but it's stuck at a three for me.

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Falxie

Status: chapter 43- returning home

Apr 18, 2022

10/10 Many tails. Much fluff. Very cute. Some misspelled words but nothing too bad.

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nicon

Status: c33

Dec 2, 2022

A fun sweet idea, told in an original way. It got boring fast. The plot is silly, and the dialogue is very awkward.

The characters all revolve around the Main Character, who's boringly overpowered and only cares about her partner. Promotes fluff, but no fluff, MC attacks anyone who pokes her. So it's about her incomprehensible romance with a god, we don't understand the god, or why the main character suddenly loves this god who forces marriage. There isn't a cute romantic build-up, they just want to brush each other's hair, and blush saying it. I'm not feeling it.

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Starlight_of_Life

Status: side chapter 8- letters

Apr 9, 2022

I give blessing to tis story Noja, it very much satisfies my need for fluff Noja. Though I want more now...

Anyway, its quite well written for a new author, the only thing I noticed at times that its a bit too much of [Tell], as in, it says what happens however it doesnt show it. [Show, dont tell.] Or so my teachers always used to say Noja. It is getting better as you progress and it wasnt that bad in the first place. However it is a very nice read anyway, very fluffy. So if you want a relaxing read, do read it Noja!

Ah yes, the Noja is just Noja. Its just what I say Noja, now then bye and enjoy the read! Or dont.. whichever you prefer, though I do recommend it Noja!

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Lakuru

Status: chapter 63

Oct 9, 2022

The story started off decent but as of where im currently at it fell off. The character interactions and reactions has been bland and robotic and feels very fake like reading off a script. There is no emotion in them and they all feel like dolls, not real people.

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On chapter 64 there is a scene of the king being disappointed with the prince and wants to let the princess take over the kingdom instead. She pretty much just agree's with no hesitation and we were given no details on how the character feels or at least should feel.

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You don't just go over an important event for this characters life and gloss over the details like that. You author only know how to write the conclusion of a story with no beginning and middle, no context.

Also its a bit annoying how our MC has to tell and explain to everyone every aspect of her life and they in turn question her on everything. Do you tell your friends or family everything that happens? Will she also tell everyone if she stepped on a rock as well? They dont need to know every little thing that happens and most things are just unimportant nonsense. This is another reason why the characters and story feels fake and bland. This may be just my own personal opinion but I find it annoying how involved everyone is in her life and her need to explain every little thing that happens to someone. I feel she and they in turn need to step back and let her live a little. Its truly very annoying.

I don't have much to say about grammar since I can read it fine. If there is something wrong with grammar I'm to much of an idiot to notice.

As for the story itself there has been almost no development at all. The story is turning into just a bunch of short stories about our MC and the goddess flirting with each other. She might occasionally sprout a new tail but otherwise nothing else really happens. You can describe this whole story currently where I stopped as of writing this review in a few paragraphs or 1-2 chapters. At this point I feel likebthe author is just writing nonsense to fill the word count and have more chapters.

Ignoring every other con of this novel the main thing the author needs to fix is really the bland, fake, and doll like characters. Like I said above, they are merely reading off a script with no feels and emotion. Your only stating the event as is with no attention to detail at all. Beginning, Middle, End author. You need a major rewrite of the series and maybe an editor as well.

This can become a really fluffly story if you let it but despite trying you failed spectacularly at it and I have not once felt any fluffy or sweet things from this story. How can I? When a robot wrote it. I'm going to continue reading and I don't know if it gets better but I hope you the best author.

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