By rTem
After a great success with one of his experiments the scientist Winston Oxton is walking home on a cold and rainy night in New York, in one of the alleys he finds a cute baby abandoned in the streets, deciding that a baby should not be alone he de
For the love of everything holy, STAY AWAY!
This thing is clearly an A.I. generated story... generated in Chinese and then Google-Translated over to English.
Grammar. Punctuation. Readability. Bad. Bad. Bad.
It's not worth your time to try and penetrate this abomination, take the time you would have spent reading this and show a loved one some unexpected appreciation. Better usage of your day.
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The other review makes this out to be the absolute worst thing ever created by man, however it's only average at worst. Typical OP protag but with a dash of fanfic and overall amateur writing, but it's certainly not as bad as the other review made me believe.
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DO NOT READ THIS NOVEL IF YOU'RE USED TO ANY KIND OF QUALITY
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TL;DR
This novel is the worst garbage I've read, seriously it doesn't have one good thing about it. Don't read it.
If you want a more detailed rant about it, read below. All things spoiled are for very minor things discussing the story, I don't believe they tell much about the exact content of the novel but I'll keep it that way in case you still want to read it.
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I haven't even gone past the first chapter, but I've seen enough to know exactly how the novel will go.
Insufferable, terrible MC and other characters
Only a sociopath would think of the MC as nothing other than a self-pitying terrible bastard with no regard for anything other than his own pleasure and well-being.
The way his interaction with a dog was written was the most bone chilling, how the puppy was described as an object of distraction from his "stale life" and then wallowed in his infinite pool of pity for himself as if he was the one who suffered most, not the poor animal who died at his neglect.
I don't know if this was supposed to be an attempt at making a "bad in the beginning but gets better" MC.
The interaction with the goddess was very artificial and jarring, like talking to an AI chatbot. Unnerving to say the least.
Grammar, punctuation and other unreadable aspects of the novel
I've read machine translated novels directly from their source before and none of them were as horrible to the eye as this novel.
There is barely any punctuation, rendering most of the paragraphs a mess of barely connected words and phrases, sometimes even lacking a period at the end, which is the bare minimum.
As far as I've read, there's no glaring grammatical errors, but then again I have barely read any more than half of the first chapter. However, this gives little comfort as no matter how well you write words it's useless when you don't know how to use them.
It also doesn't help that the way each scene and topic are transitioned to is terrible.
Conclusion
I'd give it 0/5, but since that's impossible I give it a 1/5
I will try to power through a few more chapters before posting the review, but I don't hold much hope.
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That was my first review of this novel, and now that I've read a few chapters, I have to say that it gets worse. Like jesus christ.
I take back whatever I said about the grammar, there's so many obvious errors and the punctuation got both worse and better.
The use of commas is yet to be present in any substantial way, but it seems like a tiny effort has been put after the first chapter to correct that
There's many issues with capitalisation of letters and the lack of use of the apostrophe.
The character interactions don't get any better from the first chapter. They keep being clunky and unnatural, without any type of nuance or depth.
MC is still a freak, but now that there are more characters to write about, we are not subjected so much to her bizarre and creepy way of acting and thinking.
It's creepy and worrying that what once was a grown up man is making a 4 year old toddler call her "onee-chan".
The worldbuilding is such a mess. The story is supposed to be set in your typical cliché medieval fantasy world, but anime powers and basic japanese terms keep being forced down your throat when they clearly don't belong in that setting.
My advice
Read proper books, so that you don't have to call garbage like this "average"
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i don't know why there are so many bad reviews whn tthe novel is not that bad as staed in the reviews on of the commenter said that putting an anime power in mediviel fantasy is not a good think some anime to give protagonis a cheat the magic spell itself is made from japenese, english, or numbers those animes should be flooped accordin to the commenter
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I dont know why the reviews are doing this so dirty but I really like this novel and I thinks its well done and I see nothing wrong with grammar. The only downside is the infrequent chapters but thats hardly a complaint
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The book is good, not sure about the bad reviews the story got, grammar is good and not that bad of a story.
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The only problem I have with this fanfic is that I wasn't born in the future now I have to wait for the update
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So I've read up until the most recent chap and it's still pretty good I absolutely cannot wait to see how her life in the academy will play out don't listen to reviews saying don't read this or the ones making it out the be the worst thing on planet earth because in all honesty there is nothing glaringly wrong with this novel heck I'd go as far as to say the MC isn't even unlikable really compared to others but I digress you should read and form your own opinion before listening to such slander 😭
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From the first look, the one star reviews have a point about grammar. Not something I'd read even if the premise sounds interesting.
On the other hand, if you can look past that, the five star reviews are probably correct. I'm one of the people who appreciate good grammar, and the one star reviewers are the type who demand it in their stories. Calling it AI generated is weird though, not like the Harry Potter translation meme, is it.
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