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Danmachi: Westward Cloud [Complete]
Danmachi: Westward Cloud [Complete]
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Cirrus Zephyr

He died from overwork on the job when he was in a stupor from pulling 4 all-nighters and fell to his death in an elevator shaft when they were repairing the elevator.

           In his new life, one of the first things he saw was his mother, Nephele Kutaisi, the captain of the Hera Familia known as The EmpressAbandoned early in life for his benefit, he felt some resentment for her but was taken in by Fels. He would learn over time who his mother was from a level-up paper from the guild, finding his mother as a level 9.

           He asked Fels what it means to be part of a powerful Familia and they responded with “A constant gaze like that of a predator seeking the right time to kill the prey, waiting for anything to give it an advantage.” Their words to him now made sense and why her tears were genuine to him at that moment.

           He would then begin to read and learn about this world as best as he can to one day reconnect with his mother but sadly, he never would, the pain would have been great if not for Fels already filling in the role of a parent to him.


Our protagonist Cirrus Zephyr at age 22.


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Cirrus post Olympia having lost and regained his right eye.

 

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Shirakusa Ai

Shirakusa Ai later

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Ai Zephyr

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at age 21.

Born in the Far East, Yamato to the Shirakusa clan, a small clan under the service of the Gojouno Family. But given that she is the youngest child her second older brother Ayumu went to work for them while the eldest came to work for Amaterasu along with the eldest daughter Aki also came under the Empress's service until she established a new order of Samurai to replace Susanoo's.

While the third daughter of the Shirakusa's, Ayumu married into the Ebisu Familia, Ai joined Susanoo's order of Samurai the Oceanic Samurai. Unfortunately she was not there for to long and about a few months since she joined she was already leaving her homeland behind of her own choosing.

The Susanoo Familia then traveled to Orario to grow in strength and in turn make money, money in which will be used to have a sword made of such value to be worth a nation to return home.


Candidus Nox

Candidus Nox or more simply just Nox, she is of the First Generation of Spirits created by the gods in their likeness.

Contracted to Cirrus when he was traveling through the desert. As the one who freed her and paired with the contract she made with him she will be with him even after death.

She also holds Cirrus in a much higher regard then everyone else, the only one who holds as much regard as Cirrus was her creator, Nyx.

She is known by her fellow Spirits as the Grand Spirit of The White Night, though that is her classification in terms of power none of the spirits that exist in the current era know of her. Only the gods of old who have managed to stay in Gekai for 1000 years knew her name and title.

Prior to meeting Cirrus and being sealed Nox was with a group of Contactless Spirits lead by Vento, The Spirit of The Golden Breeze. The group was comprised of Spirits of gods who get along with one another. They were a happy traveling group looking for anyone to form a contract and begin to help Humanity.

Eventually some Spirits found them and attacked them. Nox used her magic for the first time and from there Zeus's Spirits found one of Nyx's Spirits. Thus they chased. Of all the Spirits Zeus asked them to hunt Nyx's were the top priority. Why he sent them? Well it is because Zeus wished to inflict such a deep pain onto Nyx for warding him off against Hypnos.

After literal years of chasing her through several kinds of environments they had worn Nox out in the desert. They sealed her using the sealed used for monsters and that was that.

Nox now being in a isolated place lived off her own mana. She screamed to be let free but all was in vain.

She would eventually just sleep.

She slept all until someone came to her temple, picked up a rusty sword and slid down the stairs.


Circe

Circe, the Unique Spirit of Witchcraft.

A very petite spirit who escaped from the Spirit Hunt which lead to several First Generation Spirits and even some from her 1.5 generation, which were created towards the very tail end of the 1st generation and into the 2nd generation into runaways.

She had spent several centuries on a Island, cut off from the world both by the sea and from her magic which can create a barrier.

She is not a Spirit created for combat like Nox, no she is a Spirit created for support. Her specialty lays in her Alchemic and Crafting prowess. But because she wasn't created doesn't mean she isn't able to fight back no she has a good variety in terms of combat, defense, and healing.

Since she usually spends more time in Lenoa's shop she gained the name of Little Witch by the people.

Much like Nox she also holds Cirrus in a high regard but unlike Nox she holds her creator Hecate and Lenoa on the same level as Cirrus. She does have a soft spot for Ais.


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Circe post Volume 3

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Artemis

Artemis, the Goddess of The Hunt.

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Later Artemis Zephyr

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She met Cirrus when he was 10 years old when she and her Familia were investigating a monster. When they arrived at the town of Orkney. She saw a figure wearing a mask and without hesitation assumed it was either the monster or the one responsible for the letting the monster go.

After clearing up the misunderstanding and joining in the hunt she and Cirrus along with the rest of her small Familia went to track and hunt more monsters Evilus set loose to spread the forces of Orario.

It also their first hunt, the Nuckelavee that resulted in her beginning to develop feelings for Cirrus unknown to her as she never known love before then.

It wouldn't be until five years later where she would fully understand and pursue Cirrus. Of course by then Cirrus had gotten with Ai and with her excuse of Cirrus cracking the moon which is the symbol of all lunar gods she had the right to give him a punishment for defiling it. She used that excuse to try and be with him and had it not been for Aphrodite putting her title as Goddess of Love to work did she convince her to let Ai also marry Cirrus with the condition that Ai will be the second wife.

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Artemis' attire for her and Cirrus's date.

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Why is she in a bunny suit? Chapter 218. 

 

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Malion Dökk Nida

Malion Dökk Nida 

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Zephyr

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, is High-Dark Elf from the Lionash Forest way in Frontier near the Odin Familia. She would join them for a while before shortly leaving from her family constantly bothering and annoying her with marriage proposals. She struck out on her own and left the Odin Familia and forest altogether and venturing out into the world.

Over her travels she would eventually arrive at Orario. There she was met by two godddess, Hera and Freya. They both asked her to join their Familia to which she gave them a offer that would appease them both, a coin flip. Hera won the flip and so Malion joined the Hera Familia and over time became their Vice-Captain.

Years later and of the many talented and skilled members of the Hera Familia, Malion was the sole functioning member left after the Black Dragon. After that she spent years working through her trauma of the event only for Hera to find her and have her help with something which lead her to meeting Cirrus.


Hakushika Kyūjouno
Cirrus' oldest son with brown hair like his father and purple eyes like his mother. He is a bit stoic and confident in his own abilities and intelligence, he is also fairly independent, much like his father.

From a young age, from the time he could hold something, Ai and Cirrus saw he has a love for the sword so from a early age Ai began to teach him, slowly building up and polishing his talent.

Due to Hecton and Fafnir, Haku and every other child from Cirrus are naturally more stronger and smarter. Haku had more of Hecton's intelligence as by a early age Haku had more or less read the entirety of Artemis Familia's library. He is still naturally stronger then most his age.

Currently he is 8 years old and living in Fuyukusa with his mother, Ai, in attending school there. Doesn't really care for the academic nature of it but rather it's swordsmanship. He also enjoys sparing with his friends, Retsu and Musashi.

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Callisto Zephyr

The daughter of Artemis and Cirrus, a miracle that would flip the world on it's head if they knew she was a genuine Demigod. From those who knew Artemis when she was recently came into existence they all noted that Callisto acted very similarly to her, a proud child who loves to be praised for her abilities. A tomboy who loves to be active as much as she loves her father. To hide her identity Cirrus made her a special magic item to change her hair color, give her fox ears, and hide her divine-like aura so she can pass as Ai's daughter.

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Callisto, Age 8.

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Her love for her father was something that surprised many who saw her affections, many would assume she would be a momma's girl but instead she was a daddy's girl. 

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It is because of Nox, she unintentionally rubbed some traits off on the young Demigod's soul, one of which was her love of Cirrus.

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Being 2/3rds God along with the influence from her father, she also has a good blend of Hecton and Fafnir. Her body is physically stronger then her older brother, with a good head on her shoulder. When it comes to archery or hunting she is a natural born monster of talent, second only to her mother, Artemis.

Miscellaneous
Basic Abilities

Originally I was going to use the original ranking for the stats but I changed it to make it more...impressive and expansive as before the furthers one could go is SSS rank and anything above that is simply SSS.

0 to 99 is I Rank

100 to 199 is H Rank

200 to 299 is G Rank

300 to 399 is F Rank

400 to 499 is E Rank

500 to 599 is D Rank

600 to 699 is C Rank

700 to 799 is B Rank

800 to 899 is A Rank

900 to 999 is S Rank

1000 to 1099 is SS Rank

1100 to 1199 is SSS Rank

1200 to 1299 is X Rank

1300 to 1399 is XX Rank

1400 to 1499 is XXX Rank

1500 to 1599 is Y Rank

1600 to 1699 is YY Rank

1700 to 1799 is YYY Rank

1800 to 1899 is Z Rank

1900 to 1999 is ZZ Rank

2000 and above is ZZZ Rank, from this point forward the growth is extremely painfully slow.

Spirits

When thinking of a way to help Humanity the gods gave the people of Gekai their children, Spirits.

Of all the spirits the First, Second, and Third Gen were the most powerful.

First generation's like Nox are only dwarfed in power by the gods themselves. They took too much after them and were not very human compatible. In most cases the contractors all die from exhaustion of the Spirits using their magics, other's die along with their contractors as per their contractors dictating the Spirit give their existence to them. Such contracts were very, very common.

Of course the first generation knew of their flaws from their fellow generation discovering it. From that knowledge lived by making shallow contracts which allowed them to help humanity for much longer. But when the gods gave out their Falna the true might of the first generation reared it's face. When using the Falna of their contractor they can amplify their existing magic and bring it up to the realm of gods. After this was learned the Spirit Hunt got kicked into overdrive.

Second Generation Spirits like Aria (Ais's mom) were the most Humanity compatible, a little to much. When their contractor uses their spirits magic they are able to fight a Spirit of Nox's caliber, granted you will need at least 10 or maybe 15 to try and kill her (When Nox is powered by a Falna it would take at least 50 to kill her alone.).

Much like with the first generation the second also had their devastating defects. When they make a contract with one of the opposite sex they can have children with them alone. Children of the Spirits were named Nephilim. Their has only been one who lived to adulthood, the rest were slaughtered because of that adult's actions and strength.

Third Generation, these Spirits were the perfected recipe the gods finally mastered, they had a good balance of strength and human compatible. In this generation you have a lot of Spirits who turn into weapons or objects.

They are the basis in which Spirits were created from then on.

Fourth Generation. They are merely normal Spirits who were created for quantity over quality. Their nothing special about them, aside from the Heroes they contracted with.


The Spirit Hunt: The Spirit Hunt was a period of time that lasted far longer then expected and began just the same. It all began when Humanity was starting to get footholds in the world, then of course the god's themselves, stirred things up. One day a god created a spirit and before they sent them down to help humanity they told their Spirit to find and kill the spirits of the god they had a petty disagreement with. Sure enough the Spirit did it and it caught the attention of all the gods. Once blood was spilled it all kicked off and it lead to a Darwinistic environment leading to the births of many powerful heroes to take to the stage with their Spirits while the weaker ones either died or lived in hiding. Few Spirits were chased relentlessly, such is the case for Nox who was primarily chased by Zeus's Spirits all across the continent. 

Corrupted Spirits are Spirits that are freshly reborn and lack a sense of rationality, they act more like a monster with a person's insanity. Their appearance is also a reflection of that as they are like Cysticercosis to the monster they were put into. They can gain their mind and even body back after consuming a massive amount of magic stones, the higher quality the faster and better.

They can also draw in magic from the air as they are still not fully monster and not fully Spirit.

Demi-Spirit are Corrupted Spirits who gained their rationality back either by consuming Magic Stones or their ego as Spirits were flexible and strong enough to accept circumstance. Their bodies are a hybrid of monster and Spirit and they are in harmony.

In exchange for rationality and the inability to absorb magic from the air Demi-Spirits gained a Monsters physical and magical superiority. So long as they keep eating magic stones their strength and magic will increase.

There is classification on a Spirit's strength.

  1. Grand Spirits. They are entirely comprised of First Generation Spirits.
  2. Spirit Kings. They are comprised of the Generation 1.5 and some from the Third Gen.
  3. Great Spirits. They are made of mostly of the Third Gen.
  4. Spirits. They are entirely comprised off Spirits from the Fourth Gen.
  5. Unique Spirits. These Spirits vary Spirit from Spirit in this classification. These Spirits are majorly made from the in-between of Generations so they are comprised of Gen 1.5 and 2.5's.
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    Coheed27
    Status: [vol.2] quest 140- chaos

    The story is frustrating in many parts. One of which is that it starts out very well! Then it starts to go down. However, I will focus on the MC. 

    The MC is basically an adult, that forgets he's an adult halfway through the story. It's hard to understand an adult seeking power in a war zone not understanding that their will be horrible situations he will find himself in. The MC doesn't embrace his "apparent" blood lust and it becomes a crux of the story. I say apparent because his actions in the war are hidden from the main story. The MC is ordered to fight and kill to grow stronger. The MC accepts and demands the responsibility for growth. The MC is ordered to go and travel. The MC goes and travels to a war zone to get stronger. The MC accepts punishments to appease people. Accepting getting hurt by others to atone for what he believes is bad but he never forgives himself. He's not a beta MC but definitely a Very passive MC that allows others to dictate what happens. I had to stop reading as I couldn't handle the passiveness and whiny nature of the MC. 

    Update : cheated and looked ahead in the story - MC is definitely a beta

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    TheCactusLord
    Status: [vol.2] quest 127.6- childhood crush

    I wrote a long and nuanced review and crashed so simply put, bad english, and 120 chapters in and no improvement, shallow oc's, simplified canon characters, mangled half baked facts from source, insane stat growth for a rather meh power level, danmachi story with MC surrounded by women, but no harem, single oc man with single oc woman. And I doubt its pg18, more like pg15. Its not a fight story, fight scenes are bad, same for romance 99% of the time, the power fantasy is also rather shallow, its not a harem, or a r18, it seems like it wants to be all of them, and set it up to be them, then chickened out halfway with all of them except power fantasy, which its bad at since the others distract so much, and

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    the MC chucks leveling up like he used to for no real reason and levels only a tiny bit above others, as opposed to the double he used to. High 2 maybe a 3 star if the English is ever fixed. 

    Edit:  Turns out that the Astraea familia dies anyways like canon for plot and gut punch later. 193.x and 200-203 so it doesn't even get to be a happy story.

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    The_King_Of_Sloth
    Status: quest 2- dungeon preparation

    Now I am only in chapter 2 so I cant say much about the story besides the fact that it sounds interesting. However the reason I am dropping this fic is because of the writing style. The Author should try to use more show than tell. 

    For example in chapter 2 the author writes "Before going to bed, Fels asked what weapon Cirrus would like to use, and like any child, he picked a sword" The author could have actually wrote this scene but did not. But the story does sound interesting.

    Although to be fair I have not read far at all and for all I know this will be better later in the story so take this review so seriously. I just dont feel like reading more because of how rushed the begining felt. 

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    GildedHour10
    Status: [vol.3] quest 286- outside orario-...

    The best Danmachi fan fics I read. Its stands apart from every danmachi fan fic as it feels like the author knows where he is going and is not just this never ending "Every hole is the goal" kind of story.

    I also appreciate that not every girl the MC meets that they are not just waifu to collect (not counting the Amazoness) and are like friends with him.

    The author also sticks within the rules of the series and just doesnt add in a needless system when their are already one in the series.

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    Alrus
    Status: quest 76- mountains with no...

    Sorry for any spelling mistakes, the entire message was translated by [Google Translator].

    The story in general is very good and fluid to read, the only problem, at least for me, is the lack of approximation between the protagonist and ANY character, whether traveling companions or family members.

    We don't know if person X likes something or not, even his (possible) romantic interest doesn't have one because she likes the protagonist or a moment to interact and this is something that happens to all characters, including caregivers (adoptive parents?) of the protagonist.

    To be honest, the story is good, it's just this little review that makes me like this wonderful story a little less.

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    BaconDouji
    Status: quest 7

    English is not my primary language, so I will keep it short.

    This novel is the best Danmachi fanfiction I ever read. 

    • Instead of reincarnate on the timeline where Bell Cranel starts his story, the main character reincarnate in the era where family of Zeus and Hera failed to kill Black Dragon.
    • A lots of original character is in the novel.

    This novel is very fresh and interesting to read, so it is worth to give it a try. Although I haven't complete reading the whole chapter, but I didn't found any 'toxic point' until now! :D

    PS: Nice work author, keep it on! ;D

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    Normalguy
    Status: [vol.2] quest 199- next phase...

    The story very enjoyable. I had a very fun read with it. The early parts of the story are very interesting to go through with plenty of world building and some side characters that show up later on. Their not always important but they do have their own lives. The story also stays as true to the source material as they could with the MC doing as the gods tell him to as that is how it goes in Danmachi.

    The writing is also very good, grammar has gotten better. Plenty of dialog of characters talking with one another.

    The MC in particular is very interesting in that he acts like a normal person who has our worlds morals. When he first takes a human life it greatly affects him and even more so with the actions he takes to rationalize what he did. He like many underestimate how brutal war can be and just suffers because of it, he blames himself for it and it sticks with far into the story. All in all the MC does have a anger issue which could be because of trauma or maybe something the author gave him in reference to the hero he was based off.

    Another part of the story that I really like are the small details. A lot of the story you really do need to read it through, if you skim through it.

    A complaint I do have is that the MC does complaint a bit but who doesn't complain and doesn't sound annoying?

    The romance in this series is also done very well, not to cringe.

    All in all this is probably o e of the best Danmachi fanfic out there. Comparatively the MC isn't always after evert girl in the series and wanting to add them to his harem. It's a good change of pace.

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    drake2378
    Status: quest 89- leaving again

    an enjoyable story. Really like that it steps away from the harem focus of most danmachi story's. Character development is solid so far. The fights are fun and not too repetitive. While the MC is powerful they are definitely not invincible or world breaking so far. The way they portray the world is well done. Updates very consistently. The romance aspect while definitely not the main focus is pretty good and not done in a cringy or rushed and unnatural way. So all in all a pretty well rounded story

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    DrDedot
    Status: c184

    Ok, where should I start? 

    This fic is not perfect, there are mistakes here are there, some worse than others, but there are positives

    Let start listing down what I like about this fic first..

    1. The way the author incorporates original storylines or arcs into his fic so smoothly, like the sealed giant monsters that the MC fought is one such example and probably my fav arc

    2. This is probably the one of the very few fics that covers the dark ages of Orario (time period where Zeus and Hera just got kicked out of Orario) and I like it, it feels unique as most Danmachi fics follows the time period where Bell just entered Orario, and the author even took the time to try to make it as accurate to the source, or at least he tried or put in effort

    3. The amount of chapters and the author's dedication to continue writing, like holy crap, 300 chapters?! I can only think of one other Danmachi fanfic that can top that, the author is a writing machine

    Now for the negatives...

    1. Too many curses/bad words... like holy sh*t the MC curses a lot in this fanfic... there was one chapter in particular where the MC said the word "f**k" 28 times.....28 TIMES!!!! I've read hundreds of novels but I never seen a single chapter where someone would curse SO DAMN MUCH!

    And its not just one chapter, , ITS EVERY f**kING CHAPTER, , , IM NOT KIDDING, the MC on average CURSES like 5-8 times EVERY CHAPTER... the MC on this fic doesn't just have a mouth of a sailor, he has a mouth of the entire navy army... AUTHOR! I implore you to just tone the f**k down all these curses, its getting f**kING annoying!

    2. One problem that I have is that why the f**k is MC so damn weak?! I mean for his level. He has ZZZ-level status but somehow I don't recall him performing a feat that can makes him look like he can battle monsters/people above his level. The MC should've clapped Alfia and Zald when he was level 7. Note that the Zald and Alfia that the MC fought is supposed to be no longer in their prime, or else Ottar would have never defeated Zald and Astraea familia would never beat Alfia in the original story

    but somehow OUR DEAR MC WHO HAS STATS BEYOND THE S-LEVEL AND WAS ALSO LEVEL 7 got pushed back instead, even his girlfriend, an OC, named Ai, who mind you, doesn't have any cheats but did better than him and she was only level fricking 5, at least that how I remember it and speaking of Ai, this brings me to my next complaint.

    3. What the f**k... why is the MC's girlfriend, an OC named Ai, so fricking broken? She doesn't ahve any cheat skills but why do I feel like the author kept handing her powerups for no reason? 

    let me give you an example, this character reach level fricking 5 in just 4 years and then level 6 later in the arc...I don't think even Ais' leveling speed is as fast as hers and Ais is supposed to be very talented in Danmachi standards, so does that mean Ai is more talented that Ais? And guess what? This Ai character somehow was able to fight off Alfia one on one while being level 5 or was it 6? I don't remember well but I know that the author is just bullsh*tting this character's power progression just so she won't be left behind by MC.

    4. And lastly, the author is just f**king coward mate, for the first 50 or maybe 100 chapters, he set this fanfic up to have this harem-like feeling but backed out for no reason... like yeah, I've read up to 180+ chps. and no harem yet, look, I know that this has no harem tag but when the author wrote the first 50 or so chapters, he was definitely setting this fanfic up to be a harem and suddenly backed out for some reason

    That was the feeling that I got from reading this and I was so disappointed, like bruh, it was like someone promising to give you cake but gave a loaf of bread instead

    And that's all for my review, maybe I'll update this when I read more chapters and I might change some of my opinions

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    K4ZUYA
    Status: quest 68 - grand spectacle

    At first the short chapters at the front may looks concerning Fret not!! 

    After several chapters ahead its not that shorts The time skip part maybe confusing but ehh its a necessary I guessIts just I hope at the beginning author did some story background for several characters for readers not to be confusedAlthough after all thatThe story, plot, character development is very spot onI enjoyed themAs his power and all is not breaking danmachi rules and no nonsenseAlthough I'm slightly concern about the romance part, lot of stories fell apart in bringing good romanceOverall 10/10

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