Dante Tanaka, a boy who lost his parents and his way. With nobody to tell him how he should live his life he experimented with it. Some decisions may not have been the best and others may have breached a few rules here and there. Throughout this, without anyone constricting what he sees, watches, and experiences, he questions society. A hero or a villain, or something in between.
"Aren't they all the same?"
Dante Tanaka, someone who doesn't fit in with society's definition of the "norm." Someone who's gone through so much and is still trying to find his path. Continue on as he forges his own way, and searches for what he can call true justice.
*There may be some heavy topics depending on how you define them so viewer discretion is advised.*
Well the story itself is mediocre. Not good and not bad. But the writing lack a lot of things.
The interaction between the character is unnatural. The character is not talking to each other, but talking to the viewer doing world building.
There's to much changing POV in a chapter. Changing POV can be a powerful tool to write things more clearly from different perspectives, but please don't overuse it.
There's too many long dialogue, and what I mean by long is multiple paragraph of character talking in the mentioned 'unnatural' conversation. If you need to write a long dialogue author, please put some non-verbal communication in between the verbal. Like the expression and gesture of the character. It flesh out the Convo more.
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