Keep up the good work! Excited for what you do next.

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Okay, starting with the bad: The MC is a moron in a profession where being smart would be helpful, and she is rash and jumps into things without thinking, making dumb decisions in the heat of the moment that seem to only make things worse for her self most of the time. Frankly, she is her own worst enemy. Also, she is absolutely terrible at naming things. She calls a woman with blue hair 'Blue' and names a monster with blue eyes 'Sapphire Eyes'- Saphire for short, because Blue was already taken as a name.

For her good qualities, she isn't afraid of s*x. She's fond of lewd things and doesn't beat around the bush when it comes to it. She doesn't hem and haw about being the owner of a women-only s*x dungeon, she embraces it. Also, while her dumb and brash nature is the cause of most of her troubles, it also helps her in her relationships, usually. She's too dumb to take a hint, and if she wants someone to be her friend (or something more), they are going to be her friend (or more) even if it goes against social conventions... or laws (in certain states). The author says her idiocy and impulsiveness will get better through character development, but we'll see.

For the ItDependsOnTheReader stuff: She's got fetishes. The most prominent is excessive cum. Due to reasons that I'll put in a spoiler below if you wish to read, she develops this fetish and spends a hefty amount of her points on upgrading that specific part of her body to make it possible. There's also some non-consent stuff where women are dosed with aphrodisiacs and made to orgasm repeatedly, though the MC eventually does put up a sign that says basically 'Hey, don't enter unless you're okay with getting s*xed on by various ladies'. It's in the tags, but I thought I'd offer some context if the 'Rape' tag made you leery.

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