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Tethiri counting system

Counting/sheep: ‘Aen Taen Eddera’ – a

particular and peculiar system of counting sheep, up to Ugain (20):



Aen, Taen, Eddera, Pevar, Pempe, Seizh, Eizh, Nav, Dek,

Unek, Dewdhek, Trydhek, Metherdik, Mit, Aen-amit, Taen-amit, Deunau, Noantek,

Ugain.



Common Tethiri words

Táldafen – (TAWDafen) dwelling of hide and woven grass. Pl. tadálfi

Cárashi – (CAW -rashi) stranger. Pl cárashan

Tanshán – (TAN shawn) - long linen shirt-tunic, full-skirted and split in four panels for riding, worn by men

and women

Cárazhi – (CORazhi) sweetheart(for men) 

Cárazhána – (CORazh-awna)sweetheart (for women)

Gáhanash – crown prince (GAWhanash)

Salazhán – (salaSHAWN) settlement within a clan (pl. salazhi)

Nie ghó Au, henazhi Au. –

basically, goodnight. But more polite and wishful. ‘Sleep well, pleasant

dreams’

Rhiaízh n’Au! – doesn’t translate literally, but general

gist is ‘go fuck yourself’

Lezhriga – storm with lightning.

Lezhorha – storm (lezh-OR-huh)

Stálan/stála -star/stars

Lúhn - moon

Kóssué – grasses (kóss – grass) – koss-way

Hill – brokkán (brok-AWN)

Saddle – ánoru (AWN-aroo)

Bridle – ánbi (AWN-bee)

Ride – khínoru

Spurs – maozhí

Whip – bízhí

Skies – soura

Horse - molniyaiáth

Naiáth – wind (na-ee-awth – say it fast)

Lezhnaiáth – gale force 

Svárath – (SVOR-ath) curved-bladed sword. Leather-bound hilt

with silk tassels – often in tribe colours.

Rhón – (RHAWN) a 50-strong patrol responsible for checking

none of the salazhan herd strays, and ensuring none are stolen. Like cowboys

almost. Weapons are horse-bows, short javelins called naítha, and their curved

svarathi. The best riders.

Sól henazha/sól henazhi – 

a blessing or toast – always formal - ‘the sun shine on you’ (reply is

‘sól fehru azhtán Au’ – and its fire warm you)

Aván, aván! Hande lízt’ hafan nan zhaiyómen! Zhaiyómen

kunde vayomé lizt’, múndes kurhgi yomo laiyek! Eké tishe khórdi Nao! Aván!’        –
the traditional rouse-up cry, to

get caravan moving. Lit: Away,

away! The devil take the lazy hands! Idle folk starve, the devil waits for no

man, dog or beast! Sieze (you) the day! Away!’

Varzhavoy – commander – the word for ‘war-rider’ means

literally ‘head-rider’ and is: pen-varzhavoy.

Vozholvi beru – (Vuh-ZHOLVi -beroo) queens guard

Volzhoy beru – king’s guard

Aván I’hest – ‘away with (You)’ as in ‘get thee

behind me, Satan’. To ward off evil. No pronoun is used, as demons are not

considered sentient beings, but consumed only by the instinct of evil. This is also

from the ancient language no longer in daily use but used in Kánlaith.

Cylluv – (soo-luv) knife

Shashurna – southerner (sythrun in Vartjastafel)

Khirturna – northerner 

Iyóren – worthless, nothing

Malach – curse, bad spell.

Vol’ch zhabis Ni – pardon me/excuse me/forgive me.

Maru – to die – conjugated: Marau (You die)                                                                                                                                                                   

                                                                   

Characters
Names

Arianlach Cangarth: (AH-ree-UHN-lack) - 'silver leaf' -Earl of Silverheim, Crown Prince of Vartjastafel

Enhian Stengarth- (En-HI-uhn)

Henarian (Hen-AR-ee-uhn) Hervik - 'silver stone'

Kaithenal (Kay-THEN-all) Hervik

Ellazhán (Ella-zhawn) - aka Sorrel (from Sorreilli - Saw-ray-lee)- Crown Prince of the Wind Star tribe (Tethiri)

Melysarian Cangarth

Leiryn (LAY-roon)

Lute (Tethiri) - shield-bearer to Bai

Bai - War-Rider of a Tethiri caravan

Laiharth (LAY-arth) - cythraul

Arnoth - cythraul

Rurien Hervik - Baron Whiteoak/Lord Hviturek

Sersa Hervik - Rurien's oldest daughter

Morien Linden/rakshin-corth - lord of the Marwaithyr, the Raven King - cythraul

Sansa - runaway 

Yani Erválla - crowfeather, Arianlach's birth mother

Collen Garth

Garwinn Garth

Caileah


The Hervik clan

Rurien Hervik - Baron Whiteoak, lord of Hviturek and Queen Leiryn's brother (44)

Hytha Hervik - First lady Hviturek (d.)

  •  Kaithenal (22 - AWOL)
  • Kerren (20 - d.)
  • Henarian (16)

By Asgerne Hervik - second Lady Hviturek (31)

  • Sersa (14)
  • Irinia (13)
  • Gaelen (10)
  • Rurien Jr (8)
  • Aene and Alys (5)
  • Tam (3)
  • Elaen (16 months)
Location
Place Names

The Marwaithyr - the deadlands

The Eiddilthyr - the living lands

The Serenthyr - the starlands

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Vartjastafel

Iskalla

Vertland

Farslád

Moreithin

Vallesia

Serahaleros

Mortua

Cartha

Bornak


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      doravg
      Status: c32

      Wow, just wow. I have to begin by saying this novel is awesome. The culture, the made-up language, the nomads that act like nomads, and yet are at the precipices of change. The magic...

      This is a professional piece. Calling it anything less is an insult. The novel has been written with a lot of images, showing and telling, perfectly balanced between each other. Each scene is there for the purpose of moving the plot forward. Uncovering a secret of the world of the novel. You won't find any filler in here, that is for sure. 

      The romance is not over the top. The society of the world of Crowfeather dislikes gay couples, or so I was led to believe. The two couples have to hide from the world, like thieves in the night. They steal moments from each other, and show, through their thoughts and their unspoken actions, that there is an attraction between them. 

      The characters are alive. There is no other way of explaining them. They behave like you would expect real people would, if they were in their shoes. The different POVs are spread out so that there is no real MC. I think the story is richer because of that. Every person is unique and has his own road to walk. The author has done a marvelous job by linking the fates of the characters.

      Now, I touched onto this before, but I must elaborate. This world is alive with its culture. There are two types of main cultures in Crowfeather. The nomads, and the settled clan folk. It seems as if the settled people are slowly assimilating the nomads into their own culture. The nomads remind me of the Mongols, after they conquered most of Asia and Europe. When they decided to forge connections with diplomacy and marriage, rather than the sword. 

      The style could be worked on, however. Some of the paragraphs are a bit too large, while others are too small. Still, if you can look past that single flaw, you will find that the chapters are just the right length. They are episodic and flowing from one chapter to the other. There are no loose ends between the chapters. No mystery left unsolved. 

      I don't understand how this novel can be this overlooked. It is a criminal act. It reminds me of A song of ice and fire, what with the politics and the magic. The novel has the same amount of attention to detail as that book series. I will continue to follow this book. It is too good to pass out on. 

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