This novel talks about a 20 year old guy who gets dumped by his girlfriend of five years, he was left for another man. He uses the motivation to better himself and go on an adventure. What kind of adventure? A space adventure! It’s the year 2554 and our protagonist, Ryder Whitlock, lives on a remote planet ruled by a genetically superior version of humans, called Lunarians. Follow Ryder as he tries to become the first human war officer of the Galactic Terran Coalition. What’s that Galactic Terraria thingy? Well you should read the novel and find out! Also Space Pirates! Enhanced gene superpowers! Alien races! A lot of other cool space stuff!!!
Now for a more in depth summary:
Our unlucky protagonist, Ryder Whitlock, has everything he could ever want, a loving girlfriend, a doting father and relatively good grades. Well, when you say it like that, he doesn’t really sound all that unlucky does he? If there is one thing to complain about in Ryder’s life, it would be that there’s nothing to complain about, he’s bored… With no concrete goal to devote himself to and next to no motivation, he’s simply going with the flow, slowly rotting away before returning to the soil.
I hope this feeling is relatable, the feeling of boredom and loneliness while surrounded by other people.
Well, all that changes for our protagonist when his girlfriend suddenly leaves him for a Lunarian. He decides that he can’t keep living like this and uses the experience as motivation to become a war officer… But will everything go as smoothly as he planned? Of course not! That was a rhetorical question!!
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Good story so far, A new premise that I have not read before.
MC's behavior is reasonable, though explaining his train of thought is sometimes not needed when information, related to the world is provided in the author's notes.
Have to say; well done on doing the world-building in the notes, Though reducing the exposition from the MC in his thoughts would fit more with the idea of world-building in the notes.
The rough of it is MC is a thing now review later when on the spot, looking for a change, is then knocked down a peg, attempts revenge but is locked in space, using what he knows to loosen his bindings but at what expense.
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Fantastic story so far! Please continue, I eagerly await the next update!
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