Good story so far, A new premise that I have not read before.
MC's behavior is reasonable, though explaining his train of thought is sometimes not needed when information, related to the world is provided in the author's notes.
Have to say; well done on doing the world-building in the notes, Though reducing the exposition from the MC in his thoughts would fit more with the idea of world-building in the notes.
The rough of it is MC is a thing now review later when on the spot, looking for a change, is then knocked down a peg, attempts revenge but is locked in space, using what he knows to loosen his bindings but at what expense.
Good story so far, A new premise that I have not read before.
MC's behavior is reasonable, though explaining his train of thought is sometimes not needed when information, related to the world is provided in the author's notes.
Have to say; well done on doing the world-building in the notes, Though reducing the exposition from the MC in his thoughts would fit more with the idea of world-building in the notes.
The rough of it is MC is a thing now review later when on the spot, looking for a change, is then knocked down a peg, attempts revenge but is locked in space, using what he knows to loosen his bindings but at what expense.
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Fantastic story so far! Please continue, I eagerly await the next update!
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