So, I'm 7 chapters in and I have no freakin' idea what the hell is going on. Slowest, most pointless start to a slice-of-life harem ever, possibly. In the first 7 chapters, MC has been completely passive, making no effort to use his system, learn the local language, etc... just staring out windows while some kind of timer counts down, silently waiting for women to speak their legs and give him a nonverbal to stroll up and slide in..... Seriously, this protag can just go die already; he has failed to gain my sympathy.
Backstory: MC was a male prostitute/s*x-slave, maybe slave who died when his head was inexplicably chopped off (no reason given, just a comment that his body was likely processed for necrophilia by a twin-tailed redhead) ; then, he wasn't sure he wanted to be reincarnated. Author did a crap job explaining his back-story or reasons for us to care about him at all. His soul was isekaied for unknown reasons (hidden from readers). He was dumped from the sky, naked, headfirst, unconscious in a strange land, in front of people in the middle of the city. He has some kind of very rudimentary system, possibly only a store for skills (no quests, no stats). He has zero ability to speak the local language, so there is no meaningful dialogue. However, he does have the power of being angelically good looking with a huge @#$# to such a ridiculous fantastic degree that random married women on the street become sluts and shy schoolgirls who see him want to immediately take him home, get naked, and throw themselves at his @#$% for no good reason. (Keep in mind that he can't speak their language or communicate with them at all. Yet, the story actually has the police directing women to stay away from him because he is too good looking, and discuss how their wives must not be allowed to see him because they will all turn into zombie-slut-bit*hes and cheat on their husbands.)
WTF pointless, plotless half-@ss-system, ridiculous behavior, lame wish fulfillment BS is this?!!... pass on this novel. NEXT!
The reviews here really don't do the story justice at all. The story is definitely taking its time, but I wouldn't say that any of it is necessarily unimportant, even in the first world he drops into. At least in terms of character growth, Nik's start is definitely there. It's subtle, but his character and goals subtly shift as he goes through different experiences.
As for the Avatar world, it's interesting, but it's definitely taking its time. A generous amount of slice of life and lewd moments. If you aren't interested in that... I dunno why you'd want to be reading an 'adult harem' story, honestly. The custom lore and 'what if' of the story definitely takes you for a spin.
A warning though, Nik's past is definitely not a pleasant thing to read about, so steel your heart for that. Like s*xual abuse and general abuse of a minor to an extreme degree.
It's much better at some parts compared to the previous version. But it also became much boring too, compared to other version. The personality of the MC, the FL, the plot. Maybe this will change when goes to another world.
Whew, I remember the previous version of this. Quite like it but then the author decided to make an ntr of himself by making clones of himself. Which I heavily disagreed with. Hopefully he won't make the same mistake again here.
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My aunt, the acting queen told me: “Work hard my nephew. You have a royal family to build.”
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So, I'm 7 chapters in and I have no freakin' idea what the hell is going on. Slowest, most pointless start to a slice-of-life harem ever, possibly. In the first 7 chapters, MC has been completely passive, making no effort to use his system, learn the local language, etc... just staring out windows while some kind of timer counts down, silently waiting for women to speak their legs and give him a nonverbal to stroll up and slide in..... Seriously, this protag can just go die already; he has failed to gain my sympathy.
Backstory: MC was a male prostitute/s*x-slave, maybe slave who died when his head was inexplicably chopped off (no reason given, just a comment that his body was likely processed for necrophilia by a twin-tailed redhead) ; then, he wasn't sure he wanted to be reincarnated. Author did a crap job explaining his back-story or reasons for us to care about him at all. His soul was isekaied for unknown reasons (hidden from readers). He was dumped from the sky, naked, headfirst, unconscious in a strange land, in front of people in the middle of the city. He has some kind of very rudimentary system, possibly only a store for skills (no quests, no stats). He has zero ability to speak the local language, so there is no meaningful dialogue. However, he does have the power of being angelically good looking with a huge @#$# to such a ridiculous fantastic degree that random married women on the street become sluts and shy schoolgirls who see him want to immediately take him home, get naked, and throw themselves at his @#$% for no good reason. (Keep in mind that he can't speak their language or communicate with them at all. Yet, the story actually has the police directing women to stay away from him because he is too good looking, and discuss how their wives must not be allowed to see him because they will all turn into zombie-slut-bit*hes and cheat on their husbands.)
WTF pointless, plotless half-@ss-system, ridiculous behavior, lame wish fulfillment BS is this?!!... pass on this novel. NEXT!
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The reviews here really don't do the story justice at all. The story is definitely taking its time, but I wouldn't say that any of it is necessarily unimportant, even in the first world he drops into. At least in terms of character growth, Nik's start is definitely there. It's subtle, but his character and goals subtly shift as he goes through different experiences.
As for the Avatar world, it's interesting, but it's definitely taking its time. A generous amount of slice of life and lewd moments. If you aren't interested in that... I dunno why you'd want to be reading an 'adult harem' story, honestly. The custom lore and 'what if' of the story definitely takes you for a spin.
A warning though, Nik's past is definitely not a pleasant thing to read about, so steel your heart for that. Like s*xual abuse and general abuse of a minor to an extreme degree.
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It's much better at some parts compared to the previous version. But it also became much boring too, compared to other version. The personality of the MC, the FL, the plot. Maybe this will change when goes to another world.
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Whew, I remember the previous version of this. Quite like it but then the author decided to make an ntr of himself by making clones of himself. Which I heavily disagreed with. Hopefully he won't make the same mistake again here.
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Seriously good story but yea its a slow paced one.
Not sure if a re-write was necessary but hey more harem fanfic stories are always welcome for me!
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