The One Ruled by Envy
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4.6 (19 ratings)
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Synopsis
*Updates will be irregular. Basically means, whenever the fuck I want, but I won't drop it unless something serious happens.*
*I will be prioritizing quality over quantity, so expect slower uploads.*
A guy who has always wanted to go skydiving finally fulfills his wish. Little did he know that it would be his last wish. When he was soaring in the sky, his parachute failed to open. Once he finally splattered on the ground, he found himself in a body of a fox, not just a normal fox in a normal world either...
*Sauce for the picture.* PixelCed (Happy?)
Genre
ActionAdventureEcchiFantasyGender Bender- Chapter 21May 12, 2023
- Chapter 20Mar 24, 2023
- Chapter 19Mar 17, 2023
- Chapter 18Mar 11, 2023
- Chapter 17Mar 5, 2023
- Chapter 16Jan 7, 2023
- Chapter 15Nov 25, 2022
- Chapter 14Nov 18, 2022
- Chapter 13Oct 26, 2022
- Chapter 12 (guess who lived?)Sep 10, 2022
- Chapter 11 (f*cking finally)Aug 21, 2022
- Chapter 10Jun 14, 2022
- Chapter 9Jun 5, 2022
- Chapter 8Jun 3, 2022
- Chapter 7May 29, 2022
Table of Contents
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Hiatus - Updated May 12, 2023
Last updated 12 months ago
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- 284 reading
- 70 plan to read
- 6 completed
- 11 paused
- 30 dropped
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I'd say, this is so far very good
5/5 for grammar: I have not seen anything that warrants any corrections... Though that might not be saying very much since I mostly scroll through it, any mistakes that are not obvious most likely gone over my head
3.6/5 for writing: The way you write dialogues causes quite a room for confusion, though that could easily be solved by deduction, but that's not the main cause for my rating, no, this is:
The way you write the languages in dialogues specifically, it is very confusing and without any indication of what languages they're speaking, we would not know if Envy (the MC) will understand it or not, though I did made a suggestion how to avoid it in the comments in Chapter 2
3.9/5 for story: While the story has an interesting concept, the pacing is –in my opinion– going too fast
We have gone from dying, to being a fox, to being a demonic fox and then captured, and then being a helper or maid assistant and teacher to Elise, and finally being captured, all of it happened in a span of 9 chapters
4/5 for originality: This story has quite a bit original concepts... Or at least in my knowledge of a few animes, and more than 600+ stories in the internet
I recommend slowing down the pacing a bit and fixing the writing problem and my review would most likely be 4 stars
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