When aliens create a magical world based on human role playing games, Jaina and her boyfriend jump at the chance to change their lives in the most erotic of ways. They enter the magical world of New Eden where they will be reborn with perfect bodies crafted to their exact specifications. Eric chooses to become a powerful bestial class while Jaina chooses to be a lovely maiden and a slave to his desires.
Together they embark on a journey full of sex, love and adventure while discovering the world of New Eden has a few secrets to keep. Along the way they collect other girls building a harem based on love and a desire to be owned.
Set in the world of Heather the Necromancer, this story required no previous knowledge of the Heather world as it actually explains the world in much better detail.
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Hiatus - Updated Jan 11, 2025
Last updated 4 months ago
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So, smut is alright; story is basic but nothing bad. The only problem I have with it is that all the character ever talk about is the love and caring on and on AND ON again REPEATEDLY, so many times... yes, having a nice and caring master-slave relationship is important but f**k, it feels like the author is just using it to be filler...
Around chapter 1-49 to 1-51 is where I got very fed up with it, thank you for the very average story, dear author. You can do better than this, I just don't know how
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It's alright but really needs the Netorase tag. For the readers who hate NTR.
There are some grammatical errors (most of them are tense errors) and typos. Not a lot, though.
The "cultured" scenes are the describe everything type. It gets tiring reading them after a while because there are so many adverbs and passive voice. Plus, there's a lot of them. That's not really a deal breaker for me. The bad part is the actions feel the same after a while.
It uses smut for the action scenes and has a creative system.
The grammar is also good, you won't really notice the mistakes a lot.
It's not for me, but I think there's people who will love this story!
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I really like the world building here, so much more creative than the I bumped my head and I am now a s*x fiend in a mmo setting blah blah blah.... The content here is of little surprise lots of slave s*x. The first few chapters are creative, and frankly capture the sense of just starting an mmo. Then the repetition begins steamy s*x scenes become skim reading, talk of classes, skills and battles stalls out almost completely, and tired retreaded themes become the norm. There is a plot under it all, but it just seems to be mentioned sporadically and in passing. Plodding would be the best way to describe the pacing, like binge watching MASH from start to finish. The story focuses extremely heavily on the master-slave relationship, with constant emotionally check-in sessions among the main characters that frankly become tiresome. I really like the concept of these "system" stories like a narrative of a player advancing through a game or DnD campaign but sadly the end result is dozens often hundreds of chapters, of characters behaving like npcs. They never really grow despite the power they may gain, in a story world that just never seems to be as important retelling the same old s*x scene as the last 20 chapters.
/edit So "The adventures of Jaina the s*x slave." Is actually part of a series of stories that grow the world quite a bit. Yes there is still perhaps a bit too much focus on harem/slave relationship/s*x. But another 30 chapters deep and dozens and chapters into the other stories it is not as bad as my review may have painted the story. This author really deserves a lot more views on his trilogy. Re-reading my original review I feel I may have been a bit harsh in my wording but not in the actual criticism.
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It's alright. The smuts good. Story-wise its nothing spectacular. But it's not terrible. Just alright
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