It is interesting but has some issues.  The story is decent and set up pretty well. One issue is that the author needs someone (even a friend) to proofread as there are some issues. For example, I don't remember the exact chapter but the same sentence was written twice with another sentence in between. There are a decent amount of typos and other little problems that add up just enough to ruin the immersion. If there is no one to proofread I recommend at least trying Grammarly as a backup.

While I don't really mind it as I am horrible at names too, using your username as the lead heroine's name makes it feel like I'm reading OC fanfic (Then again I like Kingdom Hearts). The MC being named Onii while being a big brother makes it 100 times worse.

Using the term "Sibling Taboo" even though they aren't blood-related feels like a poorly executed attempt to attract more readers seeing as there is absolutely nothing taboo about it.

I understand that this seems like me being nitpicky but the author wants to be a published author and the series is pretty good I felt giving some constructive criticism.I'm also a little worried because this seems to be setting up for a mind-break/brainwashing and NTR thing. You have a beautiful girl heavily in love but has to be separated from her lover for some reason and the antagonist is someone who might have the ability to attempt world domination. There is also the fact that their identities will soon be discovered at this rate and with them being separated they will take the girl down and probably have some sort of interference for the rings which had their ability specifically brought up as a safety measure.

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EXACTLY WHAT YOU ALWAYS WANTED

If you have ever read a LN that teases a brother/sister type relationship for 20 volumes and felt dissapointed and cheated, this is the story for you.

The Arc 1: Afterward covers a lot of why this novel is great, the authors ideas and motivations make for a wonderful story that fills the gap everyone wants.

The Fantasy Brocon x Siscon story for people of culture.

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Starts off as an interesting concept with a moderate amount of detail and thought put into it, but eventually turns bland. 

References randomly thrown together left and right, creating a huge mess that might be hard to keep track of for new readers. In addition, the lack of creativity is a huge turnoff along with the generic overpowered protagonists. All the author is doing is rewording some concepts, change a few names and thats it. 

Most of the times, the author does not even attempt to even reword or change a name, object, or concept taken from elsewhere. A blatant example would be item names such as, Zeke's Convergence and the Locket of Iron Solari are all items taken from a popular MOBA game called League of Legends. 

Personally, I would not recommend this story at all, but it might be a mediocre read at best if you focus solely on the action or smut scenes, or if you are hardcore fans of whatever source of reference that the author has used. I understand that this is a fiction novel, but at least try to put in a bit of effort.

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not bad, but not good...

(I do not speak English, translate using Google Translate from my native language, I apologize if there are errors)

To begin with, the description of the story began years later...

We get a summary of events from the past: brother and sister are a couple of lovers, they are extremely strong and have extensive experience as adventurers, they rely heavily on each other, which impedes their growth both as individuals and the growth of individual fighting force.

And now we get a story about how a brother and sister enter the academy, separate at a certain distance from each other, and fall into a situation conducive to their growth, making new problems and making new friends.

My some thoughts:

 The past, Onii and Amae seems pretty interesting, but the story is already in the present...

 Their situation at the Academy... (2 people who graduated from the university end up in elementary school?) Although side characters brighten up this problem, but not enough.

 Many good female characters, but the romantic line is almost completely completed, there is little room for drift, no matter what happens in the future, Onii and Amae will be together... (in theory, there may be more than one younger sister, but with the current personality of the older brother and younger sister - this is unlikely so far)

 Incest is doubtful, initially they were not brother and sister, but with the help of the ritual they became... (just a tricky move by the author)

 18+ scenes are currently above average... (but it's hard to write at a high level for a long time)

  IMHO Everything else is good so far...

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It's pretty self explanatory.

Wincest, interesting story, characters you're probably familliar with but do things you always wanted them to do as well as elements from a number of good (and Amae's and my own personal favorite) animes. Overlord, NGNL and Godsuya being prominent features.

Give it a read, because it's just that good.

(Blahblah, grammar is good, blah blah, easy to read etc. I just wanted to say it's a good novel, so go read it already!)

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Great story so far with solid characters. Details are explained perfectly to where it’s not to much or to little and seem like a good story to come.

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Not going to lie, this story is pretty captivating. Decently fleshed out characters, good story telling, and, even though not too many details have been given, the world building is pretty good up to this point. Not anything too out of this world, but definitely a story to give a try reading if you are into this type of setting.

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(First review, sorry for the formatting, all that nonsense)

A great read for those who like Wincest (and probably for those who don't too), but... (extremely minor spoiler)

OP MCs, yes, but not too OP. Sweet, but not diabetes-inducing sweet. Comedy is well integrated and not at all jarring, and also is not annoyingly frequent. A well balanced work of art.

All in all, it's something I'd say you should definitely give a shot. Don't worry, it's not all like the prologue. Read through, I'd say, maybe chapter five or so, then decide from there if you want to read more. Arc 3 is a flashback arc, by the way. It's a bit confusing the first bit if you don't know that going in.

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Quite good

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Ah... I really like the part of making out the main character of this story... 😉

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