Sergeant John Rigen, who was doing a patrol at Virginia Beach with two of his marines suddenly wakes up in a strange forest.
He sees himself alone, lost some of his memory, also lost his marines. The only thing he has was an M4, a military bag that contained new types of weapons...
Note: Because there're so many complaints of the readers who said to me that they couldn't read my book because of bad grammar so from now on.
I'll start to rewrite my novel from chapters 1 - 28 because I saw those chapters have the worst grammar, have done rewrote 10 chapters, 18 chapters to go!
The chapters above those ones have been written better when I started changing the way I write.
Anyway, I hope you guys enjoy reading my novel, sorry for the inconvenience that you have gone through while reading!
I cannot recommend this to anyone. I have tried to read it I've gone like 50 some chapters into it. The characters are all overly volatile like every single one of them has mood swings they're either a 3 year old or they're like a vicious yandere teenager.
They're supposed Marines but they act like 15-year-olds and that's doing a disservice to 15-year-olds.
Every time it seems like the characters are making emotional breakthroughs and progressing their characters they instantly reset to childish 5-year-olds.
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