Menu
Read
Series Ranking
Series Finder
Random Series
Latest Series
Genre
Create
Forum
Scribble HubCreateForum
/ Series / Cheep!?
Cheep!?
Cheep!?
43.5k Views 1495 Favorites 85 Chapters 0 Chapters/Week 441 Readers
4.6 (41 ratings)
Read Add to Library
Synopsis

Charles Monroe survived the disappearance of his parents, did his best to hold things together for himself and his sister. He survived when she, too, vanished, leaving behind nothing but a cryptic note. He was devastated, but he kept moving forward as best he could.

Cancer didn’t put him down, and after suffering through several rounds of chemotherapy, Charles Monroe thought that things might finally be looking up. That is, until a virulent strain of ebola swept through the city. With his immune system strained as it is, the odds don’t look good for Charles.

Now, on the bridge between life and death, he hears a voice claiming to know where his family went. It claims that it needs his help and that it can give him a second life, one far away from all the pain he’s ever known. So, Charles answers as any reasonable person would.

He says no. Charles isn't ready or willing to die yet.

But, as with everything else to this point, even his choice to keep fighting is taken from him all too soon. With no other option but the dark oblivion of death, Charles chooses to make a deal with the spirit of a distant world that's seeking a wild card in its battle against the gods, monsters, and mortals that threaten its existence.

Someday, he’ll find where his family went. Someday, he’ll uphold his end of the bargain and hunt beings powerful beyond anything he’s ever known. Someday, he might even – hatch?

“CHEEP!?”

*This story is also available at www.royalroad.com and additional chapters are also available through https://www.patreon.com/PolarImmersion if you'd like to support my work!

-Book One of "Cheep!?" has been released on Amazon.com! Some content will remain as a teaser for that book, but other portions will be removed, up to Chapter 43, the end of book one. Limited time events may occur in the future in which the book may be acquired, so keep an eye out for future chapters for information! Thank you!

Amazon Kindle available, "Cheep!?: Book One Beginnings"

Genre
ActionAdventureFantasyIsekaiPsychological
Tags
Non-human Protagonist Reincarnated as a Monster
Table of Contents 85
Show
  1. Cheep!? 169Oct 3, 2023
  2. Cheep!? 168Sep 12, 2023
  3. Cheep!? 167Jul 31, 2023
  4. Cheep!? 166Jul 20, 2023
  5. Not a Chapter (Not a Bad Either)Jun 28, 2023
  6. Cheep!? 165Jun 23, 2023
  7. Cheep!? 164Jun 18, 2023
  8. Cheep!? 163Jun 12, 2023
  9. Cheep!? 162Jun 10, 2023
  10. Cheep!? 161Jun 5, 2023
  11. Cheep!? 160Jun 3, 2023
  12. Cheep!? 159May 30, 2023
  13. Cheep!? 158May 27, 2023
  14. Cheep!? 157May 22, 2023
  15. Cheep!? 156May 19, 2023
    Reviews 4
    Table of Contents
    Write a Review
    • 5 stars 0% (0)
    • 4 stars 100% (3)
    • 3 stars 0% (0)
    • 2 stars 0% (0)
    • 1 stars 0% (0)
    Reset Filters
    Write a Review
    You must be logged in to rate and post a review. Register an account to get started.

      Summary: Meet a guy named Charles who soul get taken by one of the “old gods” and is chosen act as their champion to fight the influence of the “new gods”. Unfortunately he gets knocked off course a bit and ends up as a chicken?! “Wait? Wheres the guide I was promised” follow Charles as he lives his birdy life to the fullest, yearning to grow stronger to fulfill his purpose while also having to constantly battle these pesky things known as instincts, even if hes mostly just ‘winging’ it. 

      Ok lets be honest here, this story isn't perfect, I cant pinpoint exactly why I dont like it. But the best way I can describe it, is that it doesn’t really flow as nicely as it should.

       Sometimes the MC is motivated and determined, while other times he just has no idea what hes doing. MC knows theres this entire world out there with beasts just as smart as he is and just has no motivation to explore it. He seems content just to let his instincts run the show. Heck he doesn’t even really attempt to check out humanity until his siblings get involved. Its not a bad way to approach your story, its just not one that im super into.

      Another thing is that this kingdom, MC lives next to, is apparently like a pokemon kingdom or something. They take taming animals more seriously then other kingdoms, and actually have laws in places for specific taming methods and taming particularly rare creatures. So knowing all that, where the heck are all the other tamed animals?! Shouldn’t there be more examples in the story itself? 

      Maybe my main problem here is a lack of good world building? Idk there’s something missing about this story.

      Read More

      8 Likes · Like
      testtube10
      Status: c76

      I agree with Poison Ice Blade, the story is great, though it's (personally) missing a little something. I would give it a 4.5, if that was possible with the current rating system.

      The main character is so cute, other characters are also cute. The author uses good grammar, much better than mine, and the plot is good.

      Now, I also tried to pinpoint what has been bothering me about this story. I mean, it is great, but also empty, somehow. 

      1. the main character's growth. It doesn't feel like he's striving to improve himself. He trains with the others, sure, but nothing more than that. He doesn't ponder battle strategy and the way to best improve efficiency. He doesn't search up on his enemies' information beforehand. He doesn't train himself. He calls himself a battle junkie bird but I can't feel it. He feels like a peaceful old man. No enemies, not ones that hurt him. The peace gets boring after a while.

      2. Goals. What is the giant bird's goals? It feels like he is just going with the flow all the time. He doesn't make plans and doesn't do things actively on his own. He just follows the humans around. He's the main character, it doesn't feel right.

      3. Lack of details. It feels to me like this world is a mushy pile of cotton candy: nothing definite, or eye-catching. No unique theme. No unique... something. Details that exist are boring. The fights and training scenes could do for more explanations. What is essence, anyway? The story feels like it will fall into the taste of people who enjoy reading about character bonding. But monster evolution stories typically place more emphasis on action and adventure, so I think it would be better to make that clear in the summary.

      4. Please don't be hurt by all the nonsense I have been saying. I still love your story, and I think you have created an awesome story. I especially love the spendid relationships between characters. And since this review is based on my personal opinions and taste, I trust you won't believe in it entirely. No, please take this in as a grain of salt.

      kkkk Cheering you on!!

      Read More

      3 Likes · Like
      SaucyHug
      Status: c60

      I loved everything in book 1 and then everything after became boring with stupid bird puns. I feel like this a burger commercial with a hot girl on the cover then when you buy the burger you realize you it didn't come with the hot girl and the burger is overrated.

      Read More

      0 Likes · Like
      aristocrat
      Status: cheep!? 36

      Good story, nice magic system, and interesting goal. No major grammar or spelling issues.

      My one issue is that the characters feel a little too made up as we go alongish. There are times when it feels more like a character is doing something because plot rather than it making sense, and other times when I think the character should be acting differently but am not sure enough of the character type to know.

      Read More

      0 Likes · Like
      Follow Tip
      User Stats
      • 309 reading
      • 77 plan to read
      • 10 completed
      • 14 paused
      • 31 dropped
      Similar Series
      A Budding Scientist in a Fantasy World
      By acaswell
      Alice is a girl who loves science and lives on Earth. Then, suddenly, she was punted into another dimension. A dimension where magic and monsters roam the land, and, for some reason, a System keeps dinging at her and telling her that her stats and
      I Didn’t Even Want to Live, But God Forced Me to Reincarnate!
      By LynneSuzuran
      A duke’s daughter wanted nothing in her life but the sweet nothingness of death, as she felt like her life served no purpose. Her wish was granted when she was killed in an unfortunate accident, yet in a sudden turn of events, she was forced to re
      Action Required
      You must be logged in to perform this action.