Army Ranger Sergeant Dean Forester, an RSTF operator, is sent on a mission to retake and destroy a secret lab now belonging to Humanities mortal enemy: The Orith. After everything goes wrong for himself and his squad, Dean is sent through an experimental wormhole on the verge of death to a whole new world, one that is corrupted by war and slavery.
Twilight Sparkle, the last Alicorn, is on the run. It had been nearly two years since the Dark Elves took the peaceful land of Equestria, enslaving it's habitants, imprisoning the remaining elements, and killing the remaining princesses. With all hope seeming to be lost, Twilight stumbles upon an interesting discovery deep within the Everfree, something she had only heard stories about: A Human.
The two must team up and take back the land of Equestria. Challenges will be faced, blood will be spilt, and maybe, just maybe, Sergeant Dean Forester will finally find his peace and harmony in this new land...
This Human in Equestria inspired work is full of action, adventure, romance, and fantasy. Be warned, this story is rated mature for suggested sexual acts, course language, gore, and violence.
Audience reviews:
"Wonderful story. Definitely underrated" - Marmo
"Lovely storytelling as always." - User14314
"Amazing work you've done here, you had me hooked from the beginning" - Darksoul85
Original Story can be found on Fimfiction.net.
Gotta say, I got through this book in record time it was so good! The earlier chapters need some work and are quite lacking in some areas, but for the most part seem well fleshed out and easy to follow. If people can get past this, they will realize that the book does an INCREDIBLE job depicting Trauma, violence, romance, and storytelling. It is a classic story about Magic Vs. Machine, and is both an interesting read and a well fleshed out plot.
The Dark Elves are a good overarching villain, the MC makes for the perfect 'power fantasy' character without going overboard, and the Equestrians are as one would expect of MLP mixed with war and destruction. (It doesn't end well)
I cannot wait for more, and hopefully more people give this fic a try! It is truly a unique take on the Human soldier in MLP trope.
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Okay before I read this I just want to say that description my god what am I in for? UPDATE Well I read up to ch21 and I can say I do not like the MC the plot is fine just what'd you expect for a war in MLP that the ponies were way to peaceful and got massacred badly, but what's annoying is the MC that's a wreck, but even before earth was getting invaded and Europe was destroyed and what did he say o doesn't involve me I'm pretty sure when humanity is at stake you are also involved in it but nope he doesn't care, also he's a soldier that's been experimented or augmented on and knows human history and he freaks out over rape and killing which I laugh at, like I guess everyone has some morales to stick to in war but still he acts like it's his first time experiencing it and freaks out like a homeschooled child that realizes the world expands more than just his house, so ima drop this probably, but nice try maybe next time
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