Gotta say, I got through this book in record time it was so good! The earlier chapters need some work and are quite lacking in some areas, but for the most part seem well fleshed out and easy to follow. If people can get past this, they will realize that the book does an INCREDIBLE job depicting Trauma, violence, romance, and storytelling. It is a classic story about Magic Vs. Machine, and is both an interesting read and a well fleshed out plot. 

The Dark Elves are a good overarching villain, the MC makes for the perfect 'power fantasy' character without going overboard, and the Equestrians are as one would expect of MLP mixed with war and destruction. (It doesn't end well)

I cannot wait for more, and hopefully more people give this fic a try! It is truly a unique take on the Human soldier in MLP trope. 

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Okay before I read this I just want to say that description my god what am I in for? UPDATE Well I read up to ch21 and I can say I do not like the MC the plot is fine just what'd you expect for a war in MLP that the ponies were way to peaceful and got massacred badly, but what's annoying is the MC that's a wreck, but even before earth was getting invaded and Europe was destroyed and what did he say o doesn't involve me I'm pretty sure when humanity is at stake you are also involved in it but nope he doesn't care, also he's a soldier that's been experimented or augmented on and knows human history and he freaks out over rape and killing which I laugh at, like I guess everyone has some morales to stick to in war but still he acts like it's his first time experiencing it and freaks out like a homeschooled child that realizes the world expands more than just his house, so ima drop this probably, but nice try maybe next time

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