This story, from all I have read, is really well done, considering I actually have a personal gripe against stories with charm stats and harems and the like. I appreciate how the charm only really draws more attention rather then make people fall for him immediately or think of how cool the MC is, like how other versions of charm stats I have seen work. I also like how you are making the characters grow instead of just keeping them the way they are suppose to be..... I don't know what else to write but good job so far and looking forward to more from ya!

PS. I hope that you don't make the yandere character that controlling or possessive over the MC to the point of the MC becoming a doormat and being unable to grow or do anything, as I have seen that happen in other stories and it serverly cripples any interest about the story. GOOD JOB AND GOOD LUCK! HAVE A FANTASTIC DAY! (like maybe tone either the yandereness down by a lot, make the yandere have common sense, etc. As well, if ya can, try and make it so those in the story have romance outside the MC so as to make the characters feel more rounded, only if you plan for more romance)

PPS: I have never read most of the stories here (the ones most of the characters and stories are used from and based on), so my judgements is basically only made based off this stories characterizations of said characters, and from what I have seen, it is done well.

PPPS: (last one I swear.... maybe) : This is my first review so it may be a very bad one, sorry if that is the case! ; P

Edit: So, like a bit later I came back and edited some spelling mistakes (I made this review on my phone) and since I was doing that I thought to say this, keep it up. I love what you are doing with the story, just please be careful with the dynamic between the potential harem, other characters and the MC. I have seen stories with character who basically get pushed around and do not stop harem members from harming other people in the story, or when people in the harem are arguing and the MC tries to join the conversation, he gets "Stared" at and shuts up, making the characters feel like they can't even have a decent conversation. (THAT was a lot of mumbo jumbo, but I hope you get the point). Stay classy!

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I am not good at writing these reviews. Anyways, most of writers can't seem to make chat group type fanfics fun. They either try to chew too much at once or drop it. 

Unlike those ones, I've found this one fun and interesting. The original power system which MC possesses and his past without being too edgy. 

All said and done, it has been a good ride so far for me. 

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ok, so I read up to the ch.150 and I really find it fun. The story is very easy going and nice to read and with nearly consistent daily update schedule it is very nice in this aspect.

MC is not too strong or weak from story perspective and even thou the story seem to constantly go forward, there is no pressure of way too many things happening at the same time or way too long wait time for development in the story.

overall good story that I can recommend for a light read.

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Many people like your work even though most of the readers don't comment/review. In fact, this is first time I enjoyed a multiversal fanfic. Even if there are a few haters, please know that there are many people including me who enjoy your work. And don't let people's opinions sway you. Just write as you see fit or you'll lose motivation to continue writing. Keep up the good work!!!

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Very fun multiversal fanfic, though the Chat Group function doesn't stand out much. The fact that there were a lot of anime references and characters I don't know doesn't help either.

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