The story has a deadpan 1st person narrative that fits like a glove for someone working in finance. Grammar has been great. A few hiccups in loose sentences that could have been made into paragraphs. Its been great so far.
Our MC had been transmigrated into the body of a civil servant. His souls sucked out of him by bureaucracy and is being outright forced to take a job that is beyond the job description. He just wants to get by in life while things keep getting in his way.
I liked the first version, I'm already liking the new version even though it has a different tone. I hope it kinda keeps the entire "MC did something bad but you don't know what" thing the first version had going on and which I'm certain it is.I remember in the first version I definitely thought that MC had done some financial scheme to starve the northern front to near destruction leading to their surrender, Because he was a tax collector who somehow did something at the northern front and everyone was terrified of him. Either way I look forward to future updates.
The author decided to re-write the story; not sure how far into the story he was before however, from what I've seen so far the writing in this story is very neat and clean. So far it's interesting and looks pretty cool since the MC understands his situation and will more than likely do things differently. Looking forward to this! Hope it continues looks really nice so far.
My name is Tim, or it was until I died. There was no light at the end of the tunnel, no white room to choose any cheats from, nor was there any meeting with God.
I didn’t die heroically while saving someone, and I certainly didn’t get hit b
I was once a normal persson, but I unfortunately died only to be transmigrated into a xianxia world as a disciple in one of the best sects in the world, I forged my own dao created a unique cultivation method and even became the grand elder of the
I'll probably give this a higher rating later.
The story has a deadpan 1st person narrative that fits like a glove for someone working in finance. Grammar has been great. A few hiccups in loose sentences that could have been made into paragraphs. Its been great so far.
Our MC had been transmigrated into the body of a civil servant. His souls sucked out of him by bureaucracy and is being outright forced to take a job that is beyond the job description. He just wants to get by in life while things keep getting in his way.
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I liked the first version, I'm already liking the new version even though it has a different tone. I hope it kinda keeps the entire "MC did something bad but you don't know what" thing the first version had going on and which I'm certain it is.I remember in the first version I definitely thought that MC had done some financial scheme to starve the northern front to near destruction leading to their surrender, Because he was a tax collector who somehow did something at the northern front and everyone was terrified of him. Either way I look forward to future updates.
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EDIT: Author deleted all chapter and it appears it's going to rewrite them, as such everything below isnnkt valid anymore.
This is a good read. The story it's fresh and grammatically correct, which is not something to scoff about.
The light comedy is there and the MC characterization is well made.
Hoping the Author won't drop this project, I suggest anyone interested to try it.
GLORYYYYYY!
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I've discovered this after author decided to rewrite everything but this is amazing I really like this try it out. PS author don't make it harem
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The author decided to re-write the story; not sure how far into the story he was before however, from what I've seen so far the writing in this story is very neat and clean. So far it's interesting and looks pretty cool since the MC understands his situation and will more than likely do things differently. Looking forward to this! Hope it continues looks really nice so far.
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