Floor 1
Luna (moon) surface
Night hours 10
Daylight hours 14
Night temperature -2°C to 10°C
Day temperature 10°C to 25°C
Events:
Meteorite
There is a 1% chance of a meteorite falling every month.
Comet
There is a 1% chance of a comet passing and causing a phenomenal lightshow every 3 months
Earthquake
There is a 1% chance of a local earthquake of random strength every 6 months.
Floor 2
Natural caves, Luna (moon)
Cave size: medium to large
Eternal night
Temperature: 25°C to 35°
Events:
Tunneling
Caves form randomly with a minimum distance of 50m and a maximum distance of 1000m between each other. Each cave has to be at least connected to one other cave.
Earthquake
There is a chance of 5% of small localized earthquakes to happen each month.
Heat wave
For 5 to 15 days the temperature will increase to 45°C. This event has a chance of 10% to occur each month.
Floor 3
Natural caves
Cave size: small to medium
Eternal night
Temperature: 0°C to 15°C
Events:
Tunneling
Caves form randomly with a minimum distance of 50m and a maximum distance of 1000m between each other. Each cave has to be at least connected to one other cave.
Earthquake
There is a chance of 5% of small localized earthquakes to happen each month.
Cold wave
For 5 to 15 days the temperature will increase to -5°C. This event has a chance of 10% to occur each month.
Floor 4
Natural caves
Cave size: small
Eternal night
Temperature: 5°C to -5°C
Events:
Tunneling
Caves form random with a minimum distance of 50m and a maximum distance of 1000m between each other. Each cave has to be at least connected to one other cave.
Earthquake
There is a chance of 5% of small localized earthquakes to happen each month.
Heat wave
For 5 to 15 days the temperature will increase to 20°C. This event has a chance of 10% to occur each month.
Cold wave
For 5 to 15 days the temperature will increase to -20°C. This event has a chance of 10% to occur each month.
Unreliable catastrophic weather
For 5 to 20 days, a hot temperature of up to 45°C surges forth from the 5th floor and a cold wave hits the 4th floor at the same time. This causes rapid temperature changes that are seemingly random. Where cold and warm temperatures meet, related weather phenomena will occur, such as fog, mist, wind, storm, and lightning. This event has a 1% chance to happen randomly each year and a 50% chance to happen immediately after a heat or cold wave. After this event no events related to temperature will happen for 15 days.
Floor 5
Volcanic caves
Cave size: large to gigantic
Eternal night
Temperature: 35°C to 50°C
Events:
Tunneling
Caves form random with a minimum distance of 50m and a maximum distance of 1000m between each other. Each cave has to be at least connected to one other cave.
Earthquake
There is a chance of 25% of small localized earthquakes to happen each month.
The floor is magma!
There is a 2% chance of a magma chamber forming beneath a cave, making the ground unstable. Beware or take a hot bath! This event counts for each cave extra and will cause a cave in after the floor of a cave broke in. There is no permanent settling inside a volcano.
Volcanic eruption
If the event ‘unreliable catastrophic weather’ is activated, earthquakes will shake this floor. The temperature will rise to 70°C and there is a medium chance for magma to erupt from the ground, walls or ceiling in random places.
6. Floor
Ocean and islands
island size: small to large
Ocean depth: up to 10.000m
Temperature: 10°C to 35°C
Ocean temperature: -5°C to 35°C
Daytime: 14 hours
Nighttime: 10 hours
Events:
Earthquake and tsunami.
There is a chance of 50% of small localized earthquakes to happen each month. They can cause tsunamis if they occur somewhere near islands.
Volcanic eruptions
There is a chance for volcanoes to erupt if they are active.
Storms
All sorts of storms can naturally occur if the conditions are right.
7. Floor
Deep Sea
Rock size: medium to large
Eternal night
temperature: around 2°C
Events:
Sea currents:
There is a small chance of sea currents occurring in a region for a few days. These can lead through resource lakes and take on their characteristics and in case of different chemicals combining cause chemical reactions
PUT. THE PLUG. BACK. IN!!!
There is a small chance each month for large amounts of water to be sucked into oceanic trenches. We highly advise not to go swimming during this time. This event will lead to multiple sea currents happening on the 7th floor. After 1 to 3 days the suction force will reverse, returning lost water to the 6th floor. This will likely cause tsunamis and the appearance of deep sea denizens on the 6th floor.
Google doc:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CpJhAcSYmWc-qsTv31qCs3R9v4Fz84p4vmdrVD7qVeM/edit
A good story so far and a good balance of world building and MC development Idk why nobody reviews story's that are great like this. Though opinions do tend to differ. Yet why are there 340 people reading this while not reviewing.
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after reading a few chapters of this story I can say it has all the markings of a good author with a plan for the story and a good sense of worldbuilding.'
Be warned that this story has fallen into the not uncommon trap of giving a Non-human MC a projection/avatar/transformation, that allows them to be human or at least human like, and then proceeding to ignore (or at least reduce the focus on) the Non-human version of MC
Author has decided to make 2-3 chapters of "human" content per one chapter of non-human content.
(at least this is better than some other stories that completely ignore the fact MC is not human, (until its suddenly convenient for the story))
i do hope the story continues with the current quality, it may even become one of the top stories on this site one day.
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I wanted to like this one. The hook I think was fairly good.
After the first few chapters it felt more like a setup that just kept going on and on though. I kept waiting for it to be something other than just the system (daughter) and building a dungeon but after a while I found out that I just didn't care enough to continue because the slog turned me off to whatever payoff would come later on.
I'm not saying it is bad, I just didn't like the pacing. This is for someone that is a little bit more patient than I am.
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An amazing story, with relatable characters and realistic progression!
If I had any complaints it would be that the author didnt research religion enough before making people's faith manifest into pseudo-gods (although I dont blame them. Religion is a quagmire.), and that the MC hasnt really mentioned his former family much or even attempted to find them since returning to the mortal world. Although even that is understandable. Dont take my word for it, read for yourself!
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Well the story was good, entertaining, and had a good start. Where the trouble begins is when she gets a human form. If you're gonna write a non-human MC maybe don't have her get a human form and forsake the non-human aspect. There are chapters where she changes back to her non-human form but most of the time it's now not even what it was advertised. Overall, I just feel lied to; there's no reason to even consider labelling the novel as "non-human" and give the MC a human form. What if I wrote you a novel about a romance, but the MC breaks up with the person and never seriously dates again, aside from a few flings with the Significant Other. Would you enjoy that story? Would you love to read a novel that's whole point is romance, but take out the romance? Of course you wouldn't, so that's why any novel that blatantly displays non-human but gives the MC a human form gets a 1 star. You're basically clickbating your readers. Shame that you felt that you couldn't handle a full-time nonhuman MC. That or you're just like GhostyZ but with your entire plot rather than just a few chapters. Anyways, 1 star and I'm very disappointed.
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