Well, what can I say about this fanficiton? So first of all, I would say that the first 65 chapters feel like the prolog to create a setting the author really wanted to write about. At least the writing style that is heavily focused on telling instead of showing that changes after that chapter or this arc indicates that. So all in all, not many (but significant) changes; characters get introduced, and the general setting gets built up. But you also can't skip it because the changes and the way things were changed are important later on. Up to this point, the story wasn't really that entertaining, but after that, the story begins to diverge heavily from the original. The MC is also more and more inclined to change things and slowly gets the power to actually change something, so it is significantly more interesting to read than the previous 65 chapters. Original characters get introduced and fleshed out, and know characters have get a well-done character development.  So the question is, are you willing to read 65 chapters of a story you mostly know already (+ some training and fights for the mc) to get to the juicy parts or not? If you are willing to do that, I guess you are in for a good story, where things like plot armor don't seem as guaranteed as in most other storys. 

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I might change the ratings in the future but...

As of now this all the story is worth.. 

The good first 

Grammar is decent. There are no typos & there are no spelling errors. The story is not bland.. & that's where the good stops.. 

Because this is basically a story about a mob Chapter suffering the repercussions of the main story. (I.e. this good because the story it's based on is good)

There is no point in making the m.c. a reincarnator, in fact, making him a normal (in world) Chapter with no knowledge of the future would have made the story so much better.. 

Instead, we have a m.c. who knows the future, does nothing (i mean LITERALLY NOTHING) to prevent or change it. And walks around like the world owes him, irritating is what it is.. 

The story doesn't even acknowledging the the fact that m.c. is wholly (or at least partly) responsible for his tragedies. He goes around wanting to be angry at the world & Pat's his own back for doing the bare minimum & not going insane  (again, irritating is the only emotion this story evokes)

Again, all the above are not bad things on their own, but there is no ground work for that aspect of his character, he is clearly being portrayed as a caring & empathetic person, and his thoughts actions show none of that.

And it has been well established that he knows what is going to happen & he has ample proof showing him that things won't turn out well, yet he does nothing...

Passive characters are not bad, but  passive characters who have all the reason, motivation & the knowledge to be an active character, yet fails to do so, is bad..  when they are completely oblivious to their own circumstances & do not acknowledge their mistakes, it's bad... when they feel no remource watching the outcomes of their passivity, it's bad. When all they do is feel sorry for themselves without reflecting on their actions, it's bad..

And when that (passive, irritating) Chapter is the protagonist of the story, who the reader needs to emphasize with... it's really REALLY bad.  

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You're introducing a lot of characters and flesh them out nicely, but how is this story different from: Some Guy in the Naruto World who looks and watches on + some of his life.

Sure small changes have been done with the overall character relationships; but so far it's 22 chapters of:

Damn, I should really protect those I love and hold dear or somethin' lmao, also I know the Naruto world but have no reaction and feelings to the main characters of said world,

I'm sorry for the rant, rather than review, but I see so much potential in this story.

TLDR: Aight imma worry and stress but do nothing; ayylmao my dad ded let the story resume as if I had never existed. 2/5

This is a trash review of mine, I know. Sorry not sorry.

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A lot of Naruto fanfic tends to follow the same pattern, get isekaied, know the future, prevent some of future tragedy and deal with some butterfly effect. But the thing is, the conflict the MC want to prevent was a major catastrophic, the author wasn't able to make a believable settings without making the MC super OP fast so they can deal with another 'bad events'. It was kinda stale after a while.

Honestly, if an average Joe ever get isekaied, this can only do so much even with future knowledge and talented body (uchiha, Uzumaki etc). It was kinda like you travelled back in time with a young body and want to prevent a terrorist attack, a country riot, a political attack from another country. Bruh, what you can even do with a child body. This was more believable story..

It was like a fresh air reading this fanfic, normal fanfic author tends to write a world of ninjas as their understanding of Japanese culture. But in this fanfic, the author the author wrote relationship and the way they hold conversation just scream to me 'west culture' (idk the exact the term but u get my point). Not a bad thing but sure a unique one

Overall a nice fanfic, hope to see more.

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I really like this story and look forward to the updates. So let's get into it.

The grammars fine, couple typos here and there but nothing major that detracts from the story.

The pacing of the story is pretty solid. Doesn't feel rushed and shows how even with the cheatigan (sharingan) it takes work to be a strong shinobi. It feels like he's truly earned his powers because we can see he's put the work in to earn them.

Storywise, its about a dude reincarnated into the uchiha clan pre-massacre in the era of Itachi. Cue the "oh s#!*" realization, and we're off. Story seems pretty realistic so far on what most people would do. It is naruto, so it's a powerwank at its core. But it isn't overdone. And there are people better than him (itachi, shisui, etc.). There are plenty of character interactions, although that is a tough line to walk. Especially when your job description is contract killer. But our M.C. Doesn't feel like an emotionless robot, so I'll take it XD.

Ultimately, I like this story because it makes sense. The power creep is done at a reasonable pace, the reincarnation serves a major purpose for the story rather than just an overdone trope, the character interactions are done well and have me genuinely invested in the characters, and the M.C. Is starting to ask himself what he wants in life rather than trying to become the next jutsu-jesus.

I'd recommend this story to anyone, not just naruto fans, although knowledge of the show would certainly help. I wouldn't recommend if you're looking for an OP godlike character by age 10, or 15. This isn't that kind of story. Yet at least, it is naruto XD.

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Might be one of the worst MC that is not edgy. The MC is gifted with uchiha genes and future knowledge and somehow the main problem he's having is a "household" problem💀 Yugao somehow manages to be more interesting compared to him.

The MC is the definition of passive character, he just accepts that the people surrounding him will die.

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I Just love it ! No need more ! 

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This story had a unique take on the POV of mob character, but the was poorly done.

Author made the MC aware of what will happen, show him planning for that future, and when the future actually came, he done nothing, why? Because he suppose to be mob character so he must do what a mob character do and be powerless to do anything.

The writing itself is great, just the setting really doesn't fit. Future memory should be remove, because it doesn't affect the story at all, and honestly only there for word fill. 

The element of writing a mob character that is an actual mob character, though it interesting, but not many can related or want to read it unless, it a tragic backstory type. 

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If you don't like novels where MC doesn't have any god like powers, don't have conections with every elit in the society, and isn't born in family so powerfull that he can do almost everything and interact with everyone crucial for the story, and you hate MC who despite knowing the future isn't trying to change it (so much, because MC doing something, but it isn't very drastic) you shouldn't read this.

But if you like character development, realistic point of view, and MC who is making decisions which could be make by most of the normal people, then you can think about reading this. Because MC is aware of his weaknesses, he know in what circumstance he is, and he is making the best choices he can make with his strength and connections. The best part apart from character development is that the MC has realistic goals.

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An incredible and differentiated work where the MC evolves through effort and dedication in a realistic way. Great dialogues and small changes to the original story that are very well done. I hope the author can continue writing for many more chapters.

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