"Where am I?" I realized I was in a movie theatre where a man with a long white beard watched a movie.
No, was that my family? That's me in a coffin?!
"Hey, you, what's that?!" I ran toward the man while pointing at the screen.
"Hohohoho, that's you. See, now it's time for them to bury your coffin."
"That makes no sense. I was going to propose to my wife and showed up at this place."
"What kind of idiot uses a crane to propose someone?"
"Are you mocking me?"
"Of course not. Well, don't you see that? Your bride is crying. You're dead, man." The old man looked at me. In his hand, I could see a packet of buttered popcorn.
"Am I dead?"
"Oh yeah, and I need a favour."
"A favour?"
"I want you to fulfil the tasks that the heroine failed to finish. How about that? If you do, I will revive you."
"Huh?"
"ANSWER!"
"Oh, sure, I'll do that."
"Great! See you later."
"What? Without any explanation?"
"I don't need to explain anything. When you wake up, look on your left thigh."
"My left thigh? What do you mean?"
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- Chapter 41 – Surprise mission.Oct 17, 2023
- Chapter 40 – Dwarfs.Oct 15, 2023
- Hello.Oct 12, 2023
- Chapter 39 – Feeling of freedom.Jul 9, 2022
- Chapter 38 – What a headache.Jul 5, 2022
- Chapter 37 – That was very destructive.Jul 3, 2022
- Chapter 36 – My aura is affecting them.Jun 30, 2022
- Chapter 35 – I am not a goddess!Jun 29, 2022
- Chapter 34 – Everyone else is awake.Jun 25, 2022
- Chapter 33 – Resurrecting the Children.Jun 24, 2022
- Chapter 32 – Funeral Home.Jun 23, 2022
- Chapter 31 – I can resurrect them.Jun 21, 2022
- Chapter 30 – Please Help MeJun 19, 2022
- Chapter 29 – Out of Control.Jun 18, 2022
- Chapter 28 – Inequality.Jun 16, 2022
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Hiatus - Updated Oct 17, 2023
Last updated 6 months ago
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This story is a dumpster fire. First all lets talk about the story itself, MC is a sh*tty person. Because he is so overpowered he doesn't take anything seriously or to heart. The villian is terrible, the MC is terrible, the side characters are mediocre. No seriously why does anyone like this???
Second of all, the writing style makes the story extremely boring to read. I wasnt immersed in the story at all! Theres little to no worldbuilding, theres no transition period, theres no character development. Writer is pretty much like, "this happened and than this happened, and then this happened"
Honestly I couldn't even tell you what type of story this is supposed to be. Because the MC just doesn't care about anything except maybe building a harem of catgirls? MC has no passion, curiosity, misery, enjoyment. If the MC character doesn't want to do anything whats the point of reading. Heck MC is supposed a villain, and he doesn't even want to destroy anything.
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To start off with the story has a very interesting premise (explained in the first chapter) and the character goes off to fulfill the list. The grammar is readable and I didn't notice very many spelling errors. The actions of the MC are erratic and not in the good way especially because the MC was not portrayed as insane (except for using a crane to propose) so it just feels like the character is being jerked around. The reactions of the side characters to the MC are not consistent, such as guards asking for an ID and then letting the MC go after she smacked one of them and almost broke his hand. From what I've seen a little cleanup and editing on how the MC acts and the interactions with side characters this could be an excellent story.
As it is 3.5 because while the story has no flow and janky characters it has decent grammar and is readable.
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