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Multiverse of Marvel
Multiverse of Marvel
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"Let's leave my origins. We both have unspeakable origins. But the problem is I know of your origins. Galan of Taa." John said. Galactus' eyes squinted as John said his real name out loud. He never expected someone totally out of nowhere knew his actual name.

"Never expected an unknown guy would know my origins. So what of it? I don't think it matters where I came from." Galactus replied.

"It doesn't. You did what you had to do to survive. But the problem is you made a deal with the devil." John replied. Galactus looked at John with more stoic eyes now. He had done many things in the past and he made many bad decisions. He just wasn't sure what John was referring to so he was silent. John seeing that Galactus was silent and refused to speak said

"Black Winter is coming!!"
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When a cinephile and an otaku/weeb travels through dimensions and gets a system which can only be described as overpowered but comes with restrictions. At first he was overjoyed with the system but soon realizes that he is in a very dangerous world where his life was at risk all the time.

Disclaimer : I am not an economist so I might have done some mistakes in the economics section of the story. If you have suggestions to make it better you can leave in the comments.

Warning - The MC won't be OP from the start itself and will grow to a powerful character in due time. The starting feels a bit weird because I am totally new to writing a novel and English is my second language. I don't have an editor so the conversations and descriptions might be little stiff. I am trying to improve.

P.S. This story is based on Marvel multiverse
P.S. 2 The picture is not owned by me

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ActionFanfictionFantasyIsekaiMysterySci-fiSlice of LifeSupernatural
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Marvel Comics
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Artificial Intelligence Based on a Movie Based on a Video Game Based on an Anime Businessmen Carefree Protagonist Cosmic Wars Movies Summoned Hero
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      Ditz
      Status: c401

      My opinion? Here is an idiom for it... “A Popcorn Flick”. In other words, this story can be entertaining to read, but is generally not of a very high quality or rich in emotional or intellectual depth. It feels like a xuanhuan. For those of you who don’t know what that means, this is a story that pushes the boundaries of speculative fiction by being a melting pot of the Authors’ wildest fantasies. Anything an Author can imagine is possible in xuanhuan stories. 

      There is nothing wrong with this style of fiction. In fact, I believe the Author does very well within this particular subset of writing. At least for this story, as I’ve yet to read any of their other works... Anyways, while this story mostly succeeds in it’s fantastical elements, it falls flat in other areas. 

      The characters tend to feel like cardboard cutouts, and without any will of their own. The main character has a tendency towards making irrational decisions, and/or seems to place special attention on things that don’t feel like they should really matter, or they simply don’t make sense. Descriptions of any physical actions are bland, or simply reduced to 1+1= whatever I want. There isn’t much of an internal dialogue or voice that provides direction... or if there is one, it feels like an insert of the Author’s personal opinion, and tends to fall into the “I’m going to do this because of this” category. After that follows a sentence or two where we are told that this is what happens. After some thought, there is no description of them acting it out, we are simply told that it’s been done, or that it has failed to be done, and only after, perhaps why... So, the situation feels bland, and isn’t conveyed that well. It could use some work. 

      Perhaps it’s a issue with perspective? The story has a tendency to shift it’s perspective from 1st to 3rd person rather chaotically. Sometimes, there’s a shift in character perspective from one paragraph to another. Like, actual perspectives, between two different characters... It can be rather confusing, and may be why we tend to get rather bland descriptions for things, as it’s sometimes uncertain from which perspective the story is being told.

      The grammar also needs work, as every chapter I’ve read so far could use some help with how it sounds in English. I’ve no idea if the Author has English as a second language? Though the writing is legible, it’s not always clear or concise. It reads like a decent translation, but still doesn’t sound quite right. Not saying it’s been translated, but that it almost reads as if it had been. Not great.

      The story exists as Good Guy power fantasy, and there is nothing wrong with that; but, after a certain point, the story Only exists, because the Author/Main Character hasn’t waived their magic wand to, make all of their “problems” disappear. Sure, it keeps the fantasy alive, but at some point, it feels like you’re beating a dead horse. It’s pointless. 

      At this moment, I feel like reading any more won’t enhance the overall story. It could instead become rancid, and start to smell. Right now, it’s possible for me to ignore the smell, but any more, and it could become overwhelming. This actually works the other way too, because if it didn’t have any bad elements, it probably wouldn’t start to smell bad later. Though... all this is just my smelly opinion.

      In the end? It’s a bit of a mess. This isn’t a bad story, as some of its’ elements are made rather well, but... it falls short of being great. Perhaps, after some English/Grammatical clean up, a little character tweaking, work on it’s execution, and then some more work on the story’s flow, descriptions and actions? It’s possible I would have given it a better score... As it is? Not bad, but not amazing either. It has some good ideas? Though, it could still use some work on its’ execution. 

      Eh... It’s a Popcorn Flick. Read it if you just want to turn your brain off, and eat some munchies while having access to some mindless entertainment. 

      ... At least it doesn’t have a harem? Those tend to be overly complicated, or oversimplified, and I’m unsure if that mess would have mixed well with this free form imagining. 

      Till we meet again! -Ditz

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      EthanPeh
      Status: 394. a threat

      Currently on chapter 394. This story's quality can be separated into 2 parts. The first 2/3 of the story and the last 1/3 of the story.

      The first 2/3 was decent. There are slight grammatical errors. For example, " The company of John" should be " John's company". Otherwise, the story reads easily. Due to the large number of side characters and sub-main characters that one can expect from a story named " Multiverse of Marvel", many characters do not get the development that they need. 

      However, I believe that " John's Life" or " John Jameson's Multiverse" would be better names for this story. It does not follow Marvel's universe, the story follows John Jameson, liar extraordinaire. Throughout the story, it is John that gets major character development. The last 1/3 of the story is when things get good, grammar gets better characters are more developed and react less like robots. 

       John's choice not to use his summons like puppets is what made this story interesting, though it would still be rather interesting, in a different way. If John used his summons like puppets this story would be far shorter.

      This is all around a rather interesting story and I am looking forward to more.

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      hideo1313
      Status: 441. announcement

      First to take of my chest " write faster, not enough chapters!!!!"

      Now to real review, good story, plot it not fast and not slow, some timeskip is long but it make sense that time pass when we are not looking, the author know his original plots, that make more good since its not just the movies parts, the system need more work in it, not that is bad, it just irrelevent after some time, and would be nice some side-stories  like he going visit the kages, or walking in NY and seeing a marvel hero like luke cage before he is a hero, or even helping they became better. Or bringing other characters in the world, whit no need to save the world or that the plot need it, but overall it a good read.

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      Stephan_Pi
      Status: connecting the realms

      This is that novel that embodies the phase "i want a guy like, that is not you", "i want to read a novel like this, that is not this" describes it well, the concept is good and intriguing but the way it is used by the MC is not that well done, because if I understood it correctly the MC can either transform into the character gaining all their powers (its shown at the start of the novel), or summon them as actual living people he has total control over, I understand a few summons, but the majority of his summons seems to be done on a whim or just because he thinks the character is cool and uses the excuse of their usefulness to summon them.

      if he can simply gain the powers of characters, I don't know why he doesn't do that often, there are many useful and powerful characters he could assimilate, and it don''t seem to have a limit if I understand it right.

      and the MC for some reason creates and summons living sentient beings on a whim without thinking too much about it, from the point of view of his summons they are simply living their lives in their world and suddenly are taken away from their families, friends, their work and school and are brought to another world (the MC world) without their consent and are literally turned into slaves to the MC, he gives them some freedom but he can take it at any time he wishes 

      Spoiler

      he even manipulates and erase the memories  of a summon about their baby son the MC didn't summon along them, essentially hiding the fact that the summon had a baby son in the first place from the summon itself, that is without mentioning the other obvious mind control he does to various summons along the one done by the system on them

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      crystalkalem
      Status: 789. lois lane (3)

      It never really gets any better than what you see in the first 200 chapters. It got a little okay between chapters 400 and 500, but it didn't last. I don't know if english is the second/third language of the author, but their English is really bad and it actively hampers my enjoyment and rips me out of the story a lot of the time when he uses words that mean the opposite of X as X.

      The author also made a lot of notes that shows they're either an incel or are still in the "cooties" mentality of a child.

      The author also introduces an explicitly explained power, and then forgets the MC has that power all the time. Such as with his system's updates, the one thing you'd expect the writer to be able to keep track of, they totally forget all the time.

      Honestly the only time's I got really invested was funnily enough when they were recounting the existing dc stories as movies. All the while still being brought down by their poor English even then.

      I really hate reading these kinds of stories where the author keeps throwing more and more new powers at their MC's and just can't keep track of any of it.

      It just punishes readers like me who have half-way descent memory when we're just trying to relax and read a story only to find ourselves screaming at the screen saying 

      "JUST f**kING USE THAT POWER YOU GOT 20 PAGES AGO OH MY GOD YOU MADE SUCH A HUGE DEAL ABOUT GETTING THAT POWER NOW USE IT!" 

      Spoiler, he never remembers. If a power is perfect for the situation, and he doesn't use it, they totally forgot it and it's lost for the entire remainder of the story. This has happened more than 5 times in this novel.

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      ajliwanag23
      Status: 510. new movies

      Im not really a fan of fanfics but damn this got me hooked, I was reading it at 10pm but when looked at the time it was 3am (lol). At chapter 510. 

      Spoiler

      At first I got cringed of what his 1st summon was cause thats too OP, he could just use them  and then the end but no, there is more to it and I like it. Why does Falcon not in the Avengers? Please upgrade Hawkeye, Black Widow got one, Poor Clint. Got some issues why T'chala is not in the avengers.

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      ALSO I dont know much about MCU and DC aside some movies so its great to know such characters exist.

      Hope to read/see:I hope joker got summoned by accident or some sort of challenge by the system or losing control on his summon or all of the above. I WANT TO SEE HOW THIS CURRENT AVENGER WILL DEAL WITH ENEMIES THAT IS NOT OF MCU. JUST AIZEN ALONE GIVE ME THE CHILLS. I hope he can also Fuse the people of his universe to their other versions, (Omni man lol)

      Thank For the Good Work Author-sensei.

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