I loved reading the story even though it's a new sub-genre, for me at least! The concept of a system that goes over multiple lives might not be everyone's cup of tea, but the main character is unique and original and thus manages to make you root for him from the first chapter.

The style of the story is organized and in order, nothing to complain about everything is presented slowly and in the correct format which avoids any sort of confusion between skills etc...

Grammar was impeccable, regardless of the difficulty to pull off a first-person, I learned a lot from it. The story is great not rushed yet not slow, everything is presented perfectly at the right time. I think the character is the biggest attraction here, he has a very original inner monologue which lets us know and see the difficulties he's going through in a very rational and not forced kind of way.

This story has great potential and though Simile can be frustrating at times, all characters are flawed one way or another otherwise there'll be no growth or development. If you're into LitRpg / Isekai give it a try, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!

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MoonWinchester

Status: chapter 1: too many options!

Jun 22, 2022

So far, 98% better than all current reincarnation novels out there. I love the concept your going for and am absolutely excited for more content. Keep up the good mate. I need more chapters brother.

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