This is a well-written take in the classic portal fantasy genre,
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The story follows Cathal a dude from earth who is bound to serve a young demon who wishes to reclaim her birthright "stolen" by her uncle and unite the shattered lands, however, They are at rock bottom with the world out to get them. This story follows their road to power
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-I would say the grammar is good with little to no errors ~5*
-The Story and Style all those not 100% original is still nice and hints to more twists ~4*
-The characters do have some good and entertaining moments but some of the choices the main cast make are...a bit weird nothing an edit or rewrite cant fix -4*
All in all, It was a pleasant surprise to find this, though it may not be to some peoples liking.
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Lucas was your average college student until he stumbled into possession o
In a world where magic is boasted as the pinnacle of human discovery, where kings and heroes fight for this great power, and the primordials who have been harnessing this power since the very beginning attempts to return the world into their hands
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Dungeon: A place full of monsters, traps, treasure, and death. Those are the Great Dungeons, with unplumbed depths below the roots of the mountains.
That’s not for me.
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This is a well-written take in the classic portal fantasy genre,
The story follows Cathal a dude from earth who is bound to serve a young demon who wishes to reclaim her birthright "stolen" by her uncle and unite the shattered lands, however, They are at rock bottom with the world out to get them. This story follows their road to power
-I would say the grammar is good with little to no errors ~5*
-The Story and Style all those not 100% original is still nice and hints to more twists ~4*
-The characters do have some good and entertaining moments but some of the choices the main cast make are...a bit weird nothing an edit or rewrite cant fix -4*
All in all, It was a pleasant surprise to find this, though it may not be to some peoples liking.
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