This is going to sound harsh but this is the one way you do not end a story. About 10 chapters before the end there started to be less plot the chapters got shorter and there were a few major random time skips I’m sorry to say that this is the worst way to end a novel I could tell as I read further along that interest was lost in even writing the story which was upsetting as a reader. Another thing was the ages of all of them and the maturity of the characters a later chapter could have been written entirely differently if their appearance actually matched their maturity. I mean what mom starts to send her 12 and 14 year old daughters around town together. The age just did not fit right with the actions of the characters in the story. &Nbsp;It could have been an amazing story and still is an interesting read but don’t get your hopes up for an amazing end.

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