Tired of one bad choice in the personalization of his trait, Kaye, now Kai, logically planned his suicide for a better chance of reincarnation to get rid of the curse that his trait had almost become. Now, Kai is in a world where people breathe fire and fart thunder!
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Warning: I'm still playing with the idea of a female and submissive Orochimaru and if you don't think fem Orochi is a waifu with a long tongue and a quirk of swallowing things then... welp.
The harem and r18 stuff will happen later because I generally write them after developing a few things but the work is at a fast pace in the terms of mc's strength and growth.
Slight AU.
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I do not own the cover pic, credits to the creator. If you want me to take it down, I will.
As long as the story continues the quality and story telling I have had the pleasure to read up to chapter 21, this will be one of the top 3 for Naruto ff. As long as the [lemons/smut] stays off screen, this will continue to to be a 5 star story, if it goes on the p*rn route like some Naruto's do, then I will make it a 3 stars and stop reading. Now then to the main points...... Writing quality is top notch with almost no mistakes..... The system the MC has is easy to follow and in fact you can totally ignore it and it will not impact your reading pleasure! The MC is a likable character from a parallel world [not ours] and has NO knowlage of the story so its a fresh take. Anyway as long as there are 5 stars on my rating I highly recomend this to you!
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Not the worst system in the naruto world (certainly better than the Gamer system), but... the author writes very boring.
- There is almost no humor in the work.
- No exciting battles.
- The author has a very strange style of writing. Some sentences just don't make sense to me. It's like someone translated Chinese with a machine translator.
- The author is trying to get into the politics of the Naruto world... Firstly, all politics chapters are POVs (without any participation of the mc). And secondly, it's very boring. Whole chapters on the elders' chatter.
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a very high quality fan-fic, definitely worth reading. If your still reading the reviews your already wrong read the book its worth it.
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One of the best Naruto fanfics. The relationship developments between most girls and the MC seem natural, though some girls seem pretty redundant like they were just added for the sake of expanding his harem.
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Good AU, fleshed out characters and most conversations not involving the MC seem real.I'd recommend this if not for the MC
He starts a new life, his 'limiter' on his emotions is removed, then he kills someone in cold blood and isnt affected because "he did it before when he didnt have emotions". Now, I'm pretty sure most people know you can't logic away emotions, well, not with much success anyways. So, instead of a MC who starts 'feeling' again, and even having horrible nightmares due to actions in his past life, we get a mostly apathetic, horny MC who focuses on the 'grind'. No character development, no moral dilemmas, nothing.
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Its a good intersting story.
The author alter some here and there and its intersting
But the alteration of basic thing is a turn off for me
Like how the author explain yin and yang seems to be the exact opposite of the manga (idk if im the one whos wrong)
And the age is cofusing.
Tsunade is 50 to 51 in naruto that means she is 39 to 40 when naruto is born naruto born when minato was 24 but now minato is in his teenz but author said that tsunade is in her late 30 idk if he mean biological age (since ninjutsu and all) but its cofusing for me.
For me personally I dont care if you change the story beyond recognition but the world rule, power, and basic data that is known must not be changed since it wont be naruto fanfic otherwise
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A very enjoyable read. I didnt expect to be this engrossed in a fanfiction. The grind attitude really sold it to me. 5/5
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One of the best Naruto Fanfics out there. MC is great and even the harem elements are good.
If you don't like harems its a tough sell since MC's main reason to getting strong is to make a harem lol.
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It has a nice take on naruto fanfiction
MC does not know anything about narutoverse so the storyline is all fked up honestly (that is the beauty of it) .
MC is of the ideology grind makes right kind of funny.
Caracters (females) kind of fall right in the hands of the MC that is a bit unsettling but that is the harem tag for
There are no glaring issues on the grammar side, but the autor could use a bit more of describeing in general (the peisages, the way tings work and the toughts that made the caracters take the said decisions [ in day to day activities ]) .
I would recomand the story is a very enjoyable read 4.6/5 🌟
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A good read, so much deviations from the original timeline and that's what supposed to happen if the MC is ambitious mf.
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