Alright I'm not good at this but here goes... The beginning is boring as hell and it took too long to get the story going. It should only take a maximum of like 5 chapters at most to get through all the prologue and explanations, I legit skipped like 90% of the chapters up till he gets into the game before I started enjoying this. You have a great thing going and you certainly drawn me in at first glance but then all the boring "Real Life" Dialogue and all hype dropped.

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I found this story while looking for some isekai to read. I'm sure others with more patience than me will definitely like it. The beginning is a bit slow to start, as it takes him 8 full chapters to start getting into the game world. It's supposed to be some sort of fluffy fantasy adventure but honestly the goddess character is just too unlikable for me. Main character offhandedly mentions her, so she decides to lock him in a fantasy world as a girl so he cant log out, while playing off of something that really hurt him badly? And it affects his brain as well from what I gather. From what's implied she also decided to punish his family, his friends, and his family's friends as well? And the story treats as a "teehee it's just a prank bro" moment. I'm sure she'll never get her comeuppance at all, as most of these stories unfortunately. Shame. The premise was so interesting but I just cant get over how the mood of the story seems anything but fluffy or funny so far. I'm sure I'm the only one thinking that way though.

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This is a cute and fluffy video game/isekai type story that warms your heart and providing a lot of engagement for the reader. 

There are some RPG elements, and some world building and game design, but it's not overbearing. 

The story isn't a self-insertion (I don't think the Author imagines themself as a cute fae/dryad, but it does have a few powerup moments that make it fun. 

I recommend this to all fans of GB and Isekai. 

Note there is some dysphoria, and the MC is very obviously an egg who has yet to crack. 

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If you can get past the VERY slow pace this is a rather good story. Granted I skipped like the first 6 chapters but still...

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I'm just gonna write my thoughts about this book. It's interesting and fun when she got in the game, but the author drags the story out to long and it makes the reading of the story become a little boring. It would be better if the author updated more, because than you don't have to wait for long and it wouldn't matter if she drags the story out to long. But the author has a personal life so he/she can decide the best time for his/her self when to update... I do definitely recommend it. And I'm going to keep reading it because even if the book sometimes becomes a little boring I expect great things of it... And most definitely fun things to happen..😜

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If you're looking for a story with a lot of fluff and cuteness, this is for you. Storymask is very good at descriptions and paints the scenes and characters in great detail, which only adds to the cuteness and fluffiness.

The story itself started off enjoyable for me and I even took part in the comments and made my own side story. However, the pacing slows down the farther along you get. I feel this is mostly because the author spends much of the prose on descriptions and actions of the characters at the expense of moving the plot forward. As I don't care so much about cuteness and fluff, I found myself just skimming through the last chapters as I got more and more bored. You could skip chapters 50 to 59, maybe to 61, and all you'd miss is the MC getting more "OP" and "rare" abilities and adding to their collection of cute animals. 

The characters: 

Michael/Wylla seems to suffer the most from the "cuteness" factor of the book. They claim that they are a man on the inside and want to return to their male body, then for the next fifteen chapters acts like a cute girl in a stuffed animal shop picking what adorable animal she wants to buy next. At first it seemed like he had a spell cast on him to make him act more like a girl, but that seemed to wear off after the first day. Maybe the spell is still there but I don't recall reading anything to suggest that Michael/Wylla was under one, especially because once in a blue moon Michael reasserts he wants to return to his male body.

The Goddess  was my favorite character. I loved how much of a troll she is and will probably read the sequel so I can see more of what she is up to. I think she is also one of the key factors to the overall plot, so the fact that you stop seeing her in the latter half of the story is probably part of the reason it stalls.

Overall, if you like cute and fluff, you will love this story. If you want plot and genderbend but don't like the cute or fluff, I still think it's worth reading, though you might want to skip a few chapters near the end.

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