Alright, criticism it is.

First of all, the author often makes writing mistakes. They're a bit hard to describe, but here's an example: "Of course, it wasn't all I had in my life as I frequently visited (every six months of a year, to be exact) my visits to my grandfather, who was living in a privately owned forest and spending his days hunting and surviving on his own. "

If you're decent at english, you'll understand what's wrong by looking at the underlined parts. I assume  the author hadn't decided on the way he wanted to write that sentence and ended up writing it in two different ways at the same time. 

Another problem I have with this novel is the over the top background. This is a fairly common 'mistake', where authors make the main character some sort of a borderline superhuman with worldwide fame. It's ok to make the MC a part of the special forces, but to have his own nickname and fame is just unrealistic, because there's only so much one man can achieve in the modern world. If you look at modern day veterans, they don't have fans, only mental issues from the horrors they survived.

Examples of this problem can easily be found in novels with names that start with 'The strongest assassin reincarnated...' and similar sh*t like that.

Also, rather than just evil gods, I would have preferred if he fought all of them, but that's a more personal gripe.

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