Let's see, this will be long... how do I start?

The story is interesting at some points. But for every good thing, there are at least 3 or 4 that are seriously bad.

Let's start with the main thing.

First. The MC never really had a goal and out of nowhere in one chapter she blurts out that her goal was always to conquer the world and have a harem. It would be nice if she had mentioned it at some point, not at a completely random moment.

Second, it starts by introducing us to a game system, with status, skills, and various things. The problem? It ceases to be relevant very quickly and very abruptly. As soon as she becomes a "god" there's no longer any point in the status window and it's dropped and replaced by cultivation that's been completely pulled out of the bag.

Third, and continuing with the cultivation thing. It has no use. A whole cultivation power scaling was created. The MC is the only one who uses it in the whole story. Chi this, Chi that, but the MC is the only one who can use it and she is not even using it, because the way she fights is basically the same as the rest of the characters, she just decided to give it that name of cultivation because she wanted to.

Fourth. Like others, I also wonder, where is the wolf god? MC is a god, yes. She has lycanthropy, yes, she has NEVER used it. Out of 85 chapters at least 60 of them, she could use that ability but never did. And I'm pretty sure she didn't even do it when she transformed Grace using her blood; and in which case Grace DOES use it.

Fifth, lots of mentions of seeing Grace's or Nora's breasts, but she never does anything or tries to make progress with either of them. There's no FL. So, don't look for progress, you're not going to find it. As people say where I'm from, she's afraid of success. I don't see her forming a harem when she doesn't even do anything with the 2 women closest to her.

Sixth, transitions. Frustrating. I can understand cuts to skip years, months, days, even hours, but randomly cut to skip a couple of minutes or worse 2 f**king seconds? 2 characters interact, the conversation ends, AND IT MAKES A CUT TO "SECONDS LATER" SO IT CONTINUES WITH THE SAME DAMN SCENE WITHOUT ANYTHING IMPORTANT HAPPENS. What the hell is wrong with you?

Seventh, explanations. Making characters tell themselves things they should know perfectly well is one of the most uncomfortable things I've ever seen. You're narrating in the third person, make the narrator explain it and not a character in his mind as if he's explaining to himself how to lift his arm like he's stupid and smart at the same time.

Eighth and this is the one that bothered me the most. Characters. There are a lot of characters, lots of them, and the vast majority are completely irrelevant and unnecessary. You use them for ONE SINGLE THING and then they disappear from the face of the earth, or you create a whole arc of random characters to serve absolutely no purpose. Yes, I'm talking about you Cobra and Scorpion vs Grace. All of that could have been done without introducing us to the life and death of those knights. They chase Grace, they fight, Grace gets hurt, the violet light is activated, everyone figures it out, and the important fight happens. Fin. Did you see how simple it was? And I'm not even going to talk about the supposed fairy who seemed important, but she only spoke like 3 times and then poof, she disappeared just because.

Ninth. The mother. Yes, a place just for her. Why? Because I don't understand what the hell the author wanted to do with her. It starts by saying that she abandoned the MC because she was born a female. Then it changed and now she is just another victim. Then she says they can't see each other because she has a supposed curse. They never say what curse it is or what it does. She "commits suicide" The MC cries when she learns about her past and when she receives the letter from her mother. Then MC comes out saying to herself that she never saw her as a mother and that she never really cared about her... what the f**k? And now she's a goddess who supposedly wants revenge FOR HER MOTHER. Oh, did I mention she's a literal goddess? Because she is, and she can cure her mother who is in a coma, but she doesn't feel like it because there are other more fun things to do. Seriously, what the hell did you want to do?

Tenth. Story. We started with a story about reincarnation and now we're watching a Shonen manga. Because yes, villains that seem taken from Shonen manga create a war between the MC's country and another. But MC who is a literal goddess, says she wants to conquer the world and have a harem, but she does absolutely nothing for that world, although she supposedly pays too much attention to it. She has a multiverse inside her, with her private planet, WITH A DAUGHTER, where she can take all the people she cares about and live eternally happy with them. But she doesn't do it because... seriously, why doesn't she do it? She is the goddess of a multiverse, why does she stay in that world? She is a goddess; nothing can happen to her if she simply goes to her universe with people who want to accompany her...

In conclusion... I think that the author did not have a clear idea of what he wanted to do and he just put everything that came into his mind and tried to make it fit with what there was. But it got to a point where he stopped mattering and he just went on and on. Curious that he wanted to turn it into a fantasy cultivation story, and the only thing he got right was filling it with unnecessary characters that were easily defeated by the super OP MC.

Sorry, this is a 2 out of 10, and I'm being nice.

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As it stands right now, a two star rating is all I can give. An interesting concept and MC is lost due to the constant jumping POV. It would be a four star if it did not jump at all, as it stands right now. The author does a cool moment then spoils it by hopping POV and revealing why it happens.

The story would be so much better if you learned things as the MC learns them. It has the potentail, it just need more work as it stands right now. My advice is, when you have something you want to share with us. Use your smart MC, you actually had a good start with this. The maids, the MC listening to the maid's gossip is great and can be built on. By befriending the maids she chould have a spy network through the entire castle.

I do get the struggle of writing and you can look at my profile to see the remains. Multiple POV/ multiple protaganist are two of the hardest to pull off, something I learned the hard way. I would advise to not do this until you have quite a bit of experiance under your belt.

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I found this book to be oddly good, placing it above most others. I read up to chapter 70 twice while waiting for more to come out, and found it quite enjoyable.

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Urgh, it's messy. The title barely fits what ACTUALLY happens in what's written. After 71 chapters, I still ask myself "Where's the Wolf god ?" There's no wolf god. No. Just a princess who happens to eat stars ? or shiny things in a pocket dimension ? and gets godly powers. She can turn people into werewolves also I guess ? But that's not enough to call it "wolf god". This novel feels more like an half-baked political/ power play one than a fantasy novel. There's magic but no in fact ? Power scaling is axed around cultivation stuff so that's barely understandable. Even the protagonist creates worlds based on dao's and immortal/breakthrough stuff in her pocket dimension.I... just can't read this anymore.

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Another system in a fantasy world. It’s not a critique of this book in particular, but I’ve always kind of found this cliché rather lazy. But there were no problems with the writing  so not bad just not what I want

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