This one has an excellent start. Realistic and likeable characters, and there's a real sense of danger for the MC, without the events taking place feeling like plot armor.
There's a few typos and grammatical errors, but considering this is translated from Portuguese it's exceptionally good.
Great! It is a realistic, fluid story with an interesting protagonist, a mysterious world scene and the themes I like best. if there's a negative to me it doesn't seem like a harem...
This one has an excellent start. Realistic and likeable characters, and there's a real sense of danger for the MC, without the events taking place feeling like plot armor.
There's a few typos and grammatical errors, but considering this is translated from Portuguese it's exceptionally good.
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Great! It is a realistic, fluid story with an interesting protagonist, a mysterious world scene and the themes I like best. if there's a negative to me it doesn't seem like a harem...
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