Honestly this is a worse copy of "I'm The Lowly Villain In The Game", and I do not use the word "copy" lightly (ie the relationship between him and his fiancee, as well as his reactions, are almost identical).

But it's worse because the too long sentences feel rushed and overall the grammar doesn't feel right.

Maybe it gets better, but I am not going to read this.

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Harem-Fan

Status: The Story was Dropped!

Aug 11, 2022

The Story was Dropped! He never even Kissed a girl, so the harem was a lie!!!!!

The story is a lot of fun and should be put in your reading list! The only thing in this story that is a kick to the ballz is the character Lily... you will absolutely hate her lol. Just ignore her, she is a plot point that must be included. The other side characters are fleshed out and the main antagonist [former protagonist] is a very good foil for our MC. Ignore minor grammar issues and enjoy this fun tale. [Chapter 54! is where it is at. He goes from zero to hero.] If you want to know about the harem spoilers then here you goooooo....

Spoiler

////CAPTURED! The following girls are a sure thing! Just a matter of time.////

---Evelyn Maddock: First harem member of the VR-game to approach Akira on her own. She is the student counsel president and the director's daughter [she is half dragon]. She looks like [Rias DxD] with blue colored dragon eyes and tail. Catlike personality and finds Akira to be interesting. She has fallen for him and appa pie. 150% CAPTURED!

---Ichinose Musashi: "Ichi" has the looks of [Akeno DxD] wielding twin katana, and is the student counsel VP, and younger adopted sister to Evelyn. Akira has a mild fear of falling into her sadist punishments. Seen drinking appa-juice [may be foreshadowing to liking Akira by the author?] 100% with her sister. [Poor Akira! Lucky bastard!].

---Amelia: Daughter of the head of Cultists group Apocalypse. God-kin of the [Dark God], convinced Akira is her [Light God] God-kin partner [in her heart]. "And she has the biggest tits I have ever seen." Kazuya commented, "What? Come on, can't you see those gravity defying curves?". May join him in class to annoy other love-interests. 100% CAPTURED!

////The following are in progress but not CAPTURED!////

---Sophia: Future saintess of the God Apollo, Looks are veiled at the moment but will most likely be a stunner. She was a sheltered girl. If Akira is a descendant of Apollo, you wont be able to scrape this woman off Akira [fanatic love/devotion]. "Yes, Ichi onee-san.", sisterhood is strong with this one. 100% if he is a God-kin. [She and Amelia will be best-friends lol!]

---Aurora: Elven Princes and a perfectionist. Typical hot, white haired, fantasy elf that is on the intellectual side, and has only noticed Akira for his rising academics. She has noticed Akira's determination to avoid Lily. Low chance for her to be a harem member but...[If she escorts him to her homeland (Elf arc?) for God-kin testing, she and her family will engage her to him most likely. 95%]

---Kiara Romanov: 1st Princess Is a brown eyed, long light-brown haired beauty, from the neighboring Empire. Strict hot-headed 3rd year student, who is doted on by her younger brother Igor. Her close aid has identified Akira, she may actually fall for him especially if he saves her a second time [which he did]! Expect her to be a harem member?...90%

---Lily: With glossy green hair she is the "complete" package when it comes to looks and body, but her brain is immature! She was a good child in the past, but due to misunderstandings and her Sword Saint talent going to her head. She and Akira are irreconcilable [both at fault]. She has climbed up the social ladder [AKA Richard's legs]. Sadly she has a 75%...[I have a ominous feeling about this one.]

---Jasmine: [MILF alert!] Beautiful green haired with wooden horns, Dryad mother of Lily. She wants to be close to Akira and his parents. Unconfirmed love with Akira [she may have told this to her daughter during the drink spilling scene]. Fan-Favorite for waifu, why?, because she cared for the past and present Akira. 50%

---Alexandre: Amazon prodigy who is like a younger version of her aunt Laura [looks like Wonder-girl from DC most likely] Has no real clue about Akira and will not be interested in him until she sees his true strength... then who knows? She is still looking for him. "This girl is troublesome." 50%

////The following will most likely NOT be waifus, but still in the wings?!////

---Anna: Well endowed, with orange hair, and the daughter of the tavern's owner. Unknown past with Akira [I believe she is part of the incident 5 years ago that split Akira and Lily, perhaps she was saved by Akira from "assault" and Lily thinks he did it to her, but Akira does not remember her? Just a guess.]. Don't expect her to be a harem member...20%

---Laura Berker: 25 year old Amazon teacher and Guild representative [possibly looks like Wonder-woman], who through her gut feeling wanted Akira to join the SIT program, and was dumbstruck with his fight with the Abyssal Acolyte's.. Low chance to be a harem member... 5%. [Akira likes another an unknown teacher however.]

---Nyla: 2nd year cat girl with hetero-chromatic; one was blue and other red eyes and super friendly. Akira only wants to mofu mofu her ears and tail. Don't expect her to be a harem member...10%

---Haruno: Mousy short black haired, glasses wearing E-class student, who is Akira's childhood crush. She separates herself from Akira on her own to not be tainted by Akira's reputation. She is a realist and chooses responsibility over love. Don't expect her to be a harem member...10% or less [I like her less than Lily]......

Harem-Fan Certified™

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just.checking

Status: chapter thirty

Sep 17, 2022

Reminds me of stories like The Author's POV, The Novel's Extra, and other stories of that nature. Decently well rounded magic system, even though it is basic.

As for characters, the MC is pretty likeable even if a little bland. He just accepts being out casted and aliened for things that the previous owner of his body did. He just accepts the consequences and misunderstandings that people have about him. I could understand why he does not interact with the main cast of game (because it might change the original story line), but it would be nice to see him interact with other people. The latest chapters were a step in the right direction with him interacting with that adventures group Dark Swords.

As for the other characters, the game MC is one of those people who have everything handed to them because of plot armor. Like his harem, power ups, and weapons. I think it there were more scenes where our MC has to train harder and take more risks to get power ups instead of just using the system and powers granted to him by the system.

The system could work in the story the way it is, but instead of the system just creating new spells and skills for the MC to use. Example of this being spell combination. I think its a nice idea but I hope before the MC could use this spell he would have to find out how to spell works and somehow cast the spell without the systems help for the first time.

The harem of the MC is pretty standard too. However the main FL has an interesting dynamic with the MC.

While I do know that this novel has a harem tag, I hope to see more characters like the Dark Sword in this novel and fMC that don't like our MC and are friends with him.

If you are wondering why I am typing so much for this one review, it is because I am bored and have nothing else to do at the moment.

Anyway this is a great novel and you should definitely give it a try.

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hannibalceaser

Status: chapter 30

Sep 17, 2022

The plot progression is at a nice pace and the plot itself is very good. I just hope the reveal of MC's past will be interesting and we get to see more of MC's incognito adventures. Kudos to the author.

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Krypton71

Status: c42

Nov 5, 2022

Great stuff hoping for updates! :) &Nbsp;

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Balgas

Status: chapter thirty nine

Oct 21, 2022

It's a good story with a good protagonist that has a clear goal of being strong to make his and his family's life be better. Only at Ch39 so not much for a detailed review.

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Notsurewhattoput

Status: chapter twenty four

Sep 2, 2022

Has a lot of pontential, it´s kind of similar to lowly villan in the game, but it could grow to be something different, the level system could be expanded upon, and the characters could be interacting with the MC in more active ways but it´s just starting, so maybe I just have to wait to see how it goes, overall seems like it could go somewhere.

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enkidumor

Status: chapter sixteen

Aug 10, 2022

This kind of novel is really chill to read for me. I am not a native speaker so I don't pay attention if there are or not grammar mistakes, but the plot is really interesting.

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Scorpian

Status: chapter 39

Oct 23, 2022

I thought it was cool, even though some people say it's a copy of the other series, it starts out similar and has a similar concept, but is actually different. Try to read it and you will realize that

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