This fic has a lot of elements and references to certain things like the Arbiter's, the bird abnormalities and workshop atelier's that mainly comes from project moon's game lob corp and library of ruina. So being a fan of their games and seeing said references to the game's throughout the fic make's me happy that there is a fic that incorporates it to the plot well. Overall I like this fic's premise as a whole and even without knowing what the references are, you can still enjoy the fic due to it being written properly and having a good story.

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a very interstiaing story a mixture of alot of differnt ideas it has good wording that makes me want to understand what it means and in gernral whats happening I can only hope it can exslpalin it all through the story give it a try its sertinly intersting 

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3/5 Rating

I want to like this story, I really do, but the tale itself is a confusing mess. The lack of proper grammar or structure means that much of the intended impact of the story is lost in translation. The author is in such a hurry to introduce new characters that the names become a slurry of words you can't tease apart. The end result is a morass of characters being introduced and shuffled off the mortal coil in short order.

I'm looking forwards to an edited version, but fear it may require a substantial rewrite of the current story to smooth out the dialogue.

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Don’t be confused by the first few chapters if you can survive those massive info dumps until getting to the Black Forest arc you’ll be surprised by the massive increase in quality 

I really recommend this if you can survive the the first few chapters 4/5

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Made an account for this novel. Love the story, very engaging. Looking forward to more chapters.

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Amazing writing, barely noticeable errors and superb way of fleshing out characters and world! Definitely recommend

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The story telling is wonderful, battles are absolutely epic, no plot holes (as far as I'm aware of), you can feel the emotions in the words themselves, rarely any grammar or spelling mistakes and the story is very easy to understand yet still incredible. 

Overall, very good writing. Tons of references too. 

 The author also reads every single comment. 5/5, definitely recommend. 

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This is the one that finally convinced me to make an account after lurking for years on this site so that I could write a review and give 5 stars.

This is a really intriguing tale. Can't give the author enough praise for their ability to hold my attention. But, for those of you who are squeamish, beware that there is disturbing content in here as well. That being said, it's very well written. I don't want to spoil anything, but the world building is heavily inspired by the works of Project Moon, i.e. Library of Ruina, which is an incredible story in itself.

Please read this. It's worth your time if you are not off-put by a bit of morbidity.

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One of the best novels I've read, Frost showing so many emotions that I felt a lot of chills and sweating a lot.

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First ever serious review on any novels for me, sorry if I made some mistakes.

Honestly, it suprised me that THIS is a original novel and not a fan fiction.

The world building, 5/5. Genuinely good and detailed to the point that I would sometimes think this is a fan fic because of how expansive and deep it is. Heavily inspired by games like Lobotomy corp. (Good game go play it)  

The characters, 5/5. The author gave alot of thought to them and made interesting backgrounds for each characters, main or not.

The writing, 5/5. Barely noticeable errors and the author fixes them fast when its spotted.

Overall, Perfect. Pretty sure this novel is one of those novels that made me get back to reading novels again after a long time. Keep up the good work.

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