This is a preliminary review, after only 10 chapters. 

So far the story could be best described as "confusing word-vomit full of grammar errors", with an MC that constantly references their past as a human, but doesn't act like it, completely nerve-stapled. It leads to a heavy dislike of the MC and the story as a whole. The setting and the world feel as if they COULD be deep, but are not. Like a light novel only worse. 

Will try to read further in hope of betterment, but the critical Reviews make me not optimistic (the positive ones even less - did they really read the same story I did?)

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This fic has a lot of elements and references to certain things like the Arbiter's, the bird abnormalities and workshop atelier's that mainly comes from project moon's game lob corp and library of ruina. So being a fan of their games and seeing said references to the game's throughout the fic make's me happy that there is a fic that incorporates it to the plot well. Overall I like this fic's premise as a whole and even without knowing what the references are, you can still enjoy the fic due to it being written properly and having a good story.

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3/5 Rating

I want to like this story, I really do, but the tale itself is a confusing mess. The lack of proper grammar or structure means that much of the intended impact of the story is lost in translation. The author is in such a hurry to introduce new characters that the names become a slurry of words you can't tease apart. The end result is a morass of characters being introduced and shuffled off the mortal coil in short order.

I'm looking forwards to an edited version, but fear it may require a substantial rewrite of the current story to smooth out the dialogue.

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Don’t be confused by the first few chapters if you can survive those massive info dumps until getting to the Black Forest arc you’ll be surprised by the massive increase in quality 

I really recommend this if you can survive the the first few chapters 4/5

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a very interesting story a mixture of a lot of different ideas it has good wording that makes me want to understand what it means and in general what's happening I can only hope it can explain it all through the story give it a try it's certainly interesting

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One of the best I've read on this site so far. The beginning 30 or so chapters can be confusing at first, but it feels intentional as both the reader and the protagonist are confused, and you are learning at the same pace as the protagonist. Some of the most creative “boss” monster fights I've seen, as all the fights are like puzzles that tell a story. I like the Eldritch themes as well, so that's a plus.

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Great story. Full of bumps and growth on the way.

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Amazing writing, barely noticeable errors and superb way of fleshing out characters and world! Definitely recommend

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Honestly, this is my favorite series I am currently reading. The mysteries are interesting and the fights against the currupted are one of the highlights of the story. If you are a fan of project moon`s works you will be right at home and even if not, it is still enjoyable (when I fund this story I didn`t even know project moon exisyed and still had a lot of fun with the worldbilding.) looking foward to more developments. 

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This story is amazing.

The Idea is really great and has been executed really well. At the start there's a lot of information dumped on you but If you can survive the first few chapters, you can prepare yourself for an rollercoaster of emotions.

So give it a try and you probably won't regrett it.

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