I mean got a good plot and all. But there's many mistakes that the author made. Even comented he didn't feel the need to correct them. 

I mean this is for fun for him. But at least fix the mistakes. 

Opening an orphanage for orphans is good and all but the story progressing so fast that it feels forced and emotionally unstable. Alongside the only character development is so forced and cliche that I really feel it's a torture to continue read this.

The only good thing is the plot and Ash's personality. 

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The premise/idea of what the novel should be is really nice but if the author rewrote the whole story then I'd give it a 10/5 stars.

What I mean is that the stories written in a fast pace. It seems like character development is scrapped so the author can push out a new chapter.  I'm not saying there isn't meat on the bone (actual meaning to the chapters).

I'm just saying, the author has pushed out a chapter almost everyday and it doesn't really seem like s/he is putting in  any real work for it. I feel as though I'm just reading someones fan fiction from 8th grade.

If this story was written and had actual savory meat then I'd prob read it everyday.

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