Four stars for now, too high for one chapter? Nah, simple bias why that is. Because I adore Tanya as much as I adore Anya. Both read their own mangas and watched their animes and enjoyed both. Nice touch and concepts on the characters, intrigued by the contrasting personalities (Tanya and Anya), would want to read (follow) further on this. Double the fun and DOUBLE THE TROUBLE, weehhehehehehhekudos author

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Insomniologist

Status: mission 4: the elegant interview

Feb 25, 2024

Very Güd. The characterization is accurate, and the way you’ve combined the two worlds together is very interesting. Highly recommended.

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Not really a spoiler (yet), but considering how much foreshadowing there is, I’m just waiting for the eventual reveal that Tanya and Anya are in some sort of Solid/Liquid Snake situation.

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A_Random

Status: c4

Feb 19, 2024

Its a bit early but this feels like this is gonna be really good fanfic. Usually crossover (or even in general) fanfics only bring one character to another story and follow that character but this one is merging both worlds into one with an actual NEW PLOT. Merging the worlds of Spy x family and the Saga of Tanya is genius and done really well that fits both the stories' narrative and currently the plot is interesting. The characters also didnt really change from their personalities from their og series (uncertain about tanya's part tho, I have not seen that story for a longgggg time). Im really excited for more chapters. Plus you get to see the literal devil being led around by a child!

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X3lNaga

Status: mission 3: ‘ooting’

Jan 24, 2024

The original before the rewrite was... Well, I genuinely cannot remember, and that in on itself says a bit. It wasn't horrible, but it wasn't memorable either

And then I was scrolling through my reading list, and then I saw the chapters I had marked as "read" was deleted (it was up to Chapter 7 iirc) but there were still 4 chapters published

Decided to check it out again and holy sh*t, I should've read this later cause now I'm left wanting more

The story is written pretty well. I don't think I saw any grammatical or spelling mistakes. The characters and how they act is pretty in-character and enjoyable as well. The only thing I see being a slight (but really not that huge of a problem) plot hole is: [of course, spoiler alert]

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How Schugel knew that "god" had abandoned them and now he suddenly became vengeful because of it. At first, you might've thought that he should've been sad at first, but do remember that this is years after. He had already moved past that stage of grief and is now in anger. But how he came across the information that Being X abandoned the world, I don't know or can't speculate how

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After that, I can't see any other problems so far. The narrative is splendid as far as I can see and the plot is gearing up to be interesting. Although, there is a few things I remember from the original work, I don't know if you're gonna add them back here. Although, I do have some speculation:

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I think Weiss not leaving the east probably means something, huh? You wouldn't be showing that without a reason after all. I remember the old version having Visha somewhere down the line, I can't remember what her exact role was. I think I remember Weiss as well, but can't say for sure. So maybe it's something like that

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