One day a blind boy got hit by a truck thinking that his life come to an end but rather than being scared.
he was feeling happy thinking that he finally not be a burden to his family as he died with a smile on his face.
but instead, he reincarnated into an abandoned baby in the anime world called Danmachi but alas in this world also he is blind.
thinking this life also going to be difficult, he
awakened template system but all templates are of blind characters.
Come and let's see how our mc will survive a world which is filled with various races, monsters, dungeon and gods.
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Important points from the author-
1- this story I inspired by Genshin Impact: the blind swordsman.
2- This is my original fanfic.
3- First I upload 25 advance chapters on pat reon into 5 different tiers after that I will start regular uploads here.
here is my pat reon link for support and advanced chapters -
patreon.com/6Shinigami9
4- if you may any questions don't hesitate to ask me on discord
here is the link -
https://discord.gg/RW63GGzb
5- cover is not mine, if you have any problem notify me.
Thanks for reading.
- Chapter- 86 Hestia confusionFeb 7, 2025
- Chapter- 85 Going backJan 26, 2025
- Chapter- 84 Miracle (3)Jan 12, 2025
- HAPPY NEW YEAR 2025?????!!!!!!!Jan 1, 2025
- Chapter- 83 Miracle (2)Dec 25, 2024
- Chapter- 82 MiracleDec 5, 2024
- Chapter- 81 Lili’s life in danger? (3)Nov 14, 2024
- Chapter- 80 Lili’s life in danger? (2)Oct 17, 2024
- Chapter- 79 Lili’s life in danger?Oct 6, 2024
- Chapter- 78 Magic (4)Sep 25, 2024
- Chapter- 77 New Magic (3)Sep 14, 2024
- Chapter- 76 New Magic (2)Sep 2, 2024
- Chapter- 75 New MagicAug 22, 2024
- Chapter- 74 Unexpected GiftAug 8, 2024
- Chapter- 73 Yuno SuspiciousJul 26, 2024
- 1165 reading
- 166 plan to read
- 23 completed
- 39 paused
- 79 dropped
its good, realy, just the time for update that sucks, but its a new kind of MC (for me), and its not a idiot with harem seeking tag, I like harem, but when you put a harem seeking protagonist with single digit for IQ, loses the fun, I recomend this if you can do faster updates, I think your fanfic gonna be one of the best ones, thx for fanfiction author
PS: English its not my lenguage, learned english playing online games and dont know verbs and etc....
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First and foremost the grammar of the first 15 or so chapters is really bad. That said, the author has clearly made severe improvements and that deserves recognition. I would hope that they eventually rewrite the those earlier chapters, but if that never happens I would say anyone read this try and push passed those earlier chapters. As of chapter 62 the grammar still isn't perfect, but is in a much more readable state then where it started.
Grammar aside this story is interesting enough to be rated a 3 bordering on 4 star, so why the 2 star rating?
This story is interesting for the plot elements it introduces, unfortunately nigh all of them are explored to a subpar degree. The most prominent example being the MC themselves. The title would lead you to infer their blindness plays a substantial role in the story. In actuality it just means every single character he meets makes a comment about it, and the MC himself has abilities that without the constant reminder from other characters would make you forget he's blind. This is furthered by the narration coming from a third person view and rarely a first person view, so there are very few times where we actually experience what he experiences. Most importantly though the author clearly hasn't made an attempt to research what life is like as a blind person, and every now and then there's a line of dialogue or narration that shows that.
There's a line around chapter 50, stating he's knows nothing about men and women romantically because he's been blind his whole life and doesn't watch porn. Considering the fact he was 17 when reincarnated, and plenty of people's first crush are characters in books, tv shows, games, teachers, neighbors, etc. The point is silly at best and offensive at worst.
Second to how the author manages the characterization of the main character, the author also makes changes to the world of Danmachi. That by itself is a great thing, writing is no easy task and its impressive and interesting to see authors make changes. That said the changes the authors should have deep ramifications, yet they are only immersed with to extent of effecting the MC and no one else.
The MC levels up so quickly that the gods and goddess don't believe the Guild and Ouranos when it's announced at the Denatus. This is a change from the original where Ouranos' words are considered the end all be all, he is impartial rule abiding God. Having his statements be one that other gods and goddess choose whether to believe or disbelieve when it's convenient to the plot has more ramifications outside of the MC, unfortunately those aren't explored.
Last but not least the MC has no goal. His initial goal was to become an adventurer, which he accomplished within the first few chapters. Since then he's been repeating the events of bell (which is fine), but he's been doing so without a goal explicitly being said or even implied.
All in all I do think this story has a lot of potential, I think the system is bold and the template portion is different from many other systems I've seen.
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Plot is fine, but the grammar of early chapters is concerning, I don't know yet if it gets better later on but the author don't seem to plan on updating these
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Do people really pay to read advanced chapter uf such a trash fic like this? The fact alone that author don't put any effort in the grammar department is reason enough to this fic be 1 star, but will all the loopholes in the fic it's even worse. I really want to give all the other reason why this fic should receive minus stars but the fact people pay to see advanced chapters but author don't care to better his grammar is already all is needed to be show of this author and his fic
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While so far the story premise is interesting I personally find it extremely difficult to read these chapters due to horrible grammar and overall word placement, it reads like a cultivation novel, with elementary level Grammer, with Japanese plot, it's interesting, but overall Grammer is HORRIBLE, almost every sentence I would read I would just read it correctly in my head but even then it's really BAD, for an example almost every sentence is like " because I hunt for 2 hour I killed 700 monster, so probably go to guild and sell crystals, but seeing progress I have maybe I go to second floor and see new monster" it's honestly unbearable after a few chapters so I'm dropping sorry, but maybee proofread a little please and I would have probably kept reading but as it stands it hurts my brain deciphering these sentences.
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It does have some grammar issues in the earlier chapters but nothing too dractic. I really like the MC personality, he is calm and collected, smart and kind most of the time but definitely not a pushover if it needed, the perfect representation of a mature adult in a child body, the author did really a good work with him.
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