Cultivation | ||||
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Rank | Realm | Beast Realm | Details | |
1 | Body Tempering Stage | Beast* | Houtian Realm | |
2 | Qi Realm | Wild Beast | ||
3 | True Qi Realm | Mad Beast | ||
4 | Profound True Qi Realm | Ferocious Beast | ||
5 | Spirit Realm | Demonic Beast | Xiantian Realm | |
6 | Origin Core Realm | ,, | ||
7 | Sky Realm | |||
8 | Heaven Realm | |||
I'm honestly a little impressed at having found a much worse version of BaiSawa's already mediocre work from back then.
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There is very little effort put into grammar, spelling or syntax, which just makes the whole thing a chore to read.
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Characters are extremely childish, both in their behavior and dialogue, and it really reflects the author's young age. Basically any character interaction throws you completely out of any sort of immersion that may have taken place in such a jagged environment in the first place.
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Descriptions and general language is very below average.
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All-in-all, you don't feel ready to publish your written work yet. At this point in your writing, you should be focusing less on producing work and more on actually building an acceptable base with which you can display your ideas.
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Honestly.. I'm a little offended at all of these 5 star bullshít reviews. Whether it's an attempt to encourage the writer or not, it's hugely misleading for anyone looking for a decent story to read. I understand being lenient and appreciative of a person providing free content, but it should not affect ratings to this extent. Especially not since the writer already made and linked a Patreon account which, understandably, no one is donating to.
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TL;DR: If you're searching for a decent read, look elsewhere.
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A couple of years back, I believe the novel was called "number one under heavens" written by baiswa or something. This author liked that novel so he took what he remembers from reading it and started his own novel from that universe. The setting is almost the same but there are differences made by the new author.
So far the novel is good and funny.
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Interesting story, good plot. MC deals with people according to situation, humorous. I don't know how to write a review so just take it as it is.
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I love this novel, good plot, characters all. I simply love this. Keep it up. Best of luck.I want to continue this epic adventure author-san
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Maybe I came in expecting something of high quality, but this is still a huge disappointment. Let me not get started about the 'romance' (?) and the extremely childish dialogues in this novel.
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