The story started good, MC personality was friendrly, Marcel at the beginig was a little anoying, and Lance gave a feeling as if he was sh*ty person, I even though that Gabriel was the good guy (Oh I fool).

What get me from suprise was The s*xual harasment bacause I didn't saw eny waring about it and I did not expect something like this in this sort of novel (And because of that I had to made a little break from this story).

What was the bigest suprise for me was that Marcel was a girl but this time it wasn't bad suprise, but some interactions her with MC was for me a little strange (only because of how I was imagining these interactions).

In the end what I was thinking about characters: MC is a good guy; Lance is also the good guy; Marcel isn't any more anoying; Gabriel.... what can I said, he has private place in the deepest floor of hell waiting for him (But, my the bigest disappointment is that he didn't receive any punishment in this story).

For the entire story I was hoping that MC will be free, and I hoped that He will also get her freedom, and They got it so I am happy about it. And that Marcel gain her cybernetic legs was also good.

So ending this review (if I can name this that) the story is good, the characters are liklible (not including Gabriel), the ending is happy and that is what I was hooping for.

I give this story 4/5 because despite that this story is good it isn't excelent (the story was progressing at very fast speed, to fast for me)

So good luck in your next novels, may they be better that this one or as good as this one.

♥ for the story.

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