I'm on chapter 37 now, but sorry, I can't keep reading this story (it's even more like the main character's diary). I can't empathize with the characters and the MC (they're not well revealed). Another disadvantage: Points of characteristics in the system do not affect the MC (4 INTA and 120 INTA, and the MC is the same. I.e. Perceives and processes information in the same way, mental fatigue at previous loads is not reduced, the recovery time of mental and physical forces is not reduced, the foresight of action is not improved, and so on). Also unknown are the statistics of other characters and because of this it is not clear how strong MC. The idea is good, but worth working on the implementation. Good luck and success to the author.

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honestly speaking, the first major arc of this series was 'meh', for me at least. It had interesting characters but it just felt like the protag was too OP and got everything- strength, intelligence, friends, status, no bullying, dates, just everything- but then the current arc hit, and a lot of things changed, I rly like this arc, and the implications it has on our protag's relationships.

to any incoming readers, the first 40-ish chapters will be the self-insert type, after which a reality-check chapter hits and sh*t rly hits the fan. But, I cannot make any confirmations that the current arc determines the future, and it is likely that the story is gonna become more self-inserty again, which I will be sad for, cos this has a lot of potential.

my advice to the author- pls, make sure the characters act like ppl, esp MC, don't make him do anything weird just for self-insert. This arc is the perfect opportunity to change up ur mc's dynamics with the other cast. I personally find an MC who has a clear weakpoint, like a strong weakpoint (my suggestion, an inability to trust others, and acting hostile, rude to otehrs) and him slowly working to break it than just a boring self-insert- its up to u to make the decisions, I binged ur series in a couple days, like it so far.

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friend, I will follow the story from this platform, rip to Webnovel xd, the story is different from other Fanfics, although it starts low, it improves more and more, I like the current arc a lot.

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Read till chapter 67.

Characters simply have no set personalities, they change as the author needs them to be. There is also no rhyme or reason as to why they react the way they do, mostly through forcing a plot to happen regardless of how real characters might actually react and think. 

For example, the bland MC that has been more like an observer that has dulled emotions suddenly felt rage when something he has no emotional connection to or yet mentioned, happened. 

Then plot proceeded to something so awfully forced and illogical that made me drop the novel.

Canon characters are basically badly written caricatures of themselves. 

A great idea, badly executed. 

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The story started out a bit boring, but it took an interesting turn. Has the work been completely abandoned? In the last few chapters the author managed to hold my attention tightly. I still want to know what will happen between the MC, Hazel and Rox.

Thanks for the story.

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