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Astrid, a mischievous noble teen, long dreamed of exploring the ancient cities preserved beneath the waves, left behind from a time before the ocean swallowed the world.
When an ancient monster long thought dead assaults humanity's last bastion, a floating ship-city, she awakens her System early–only, she's not a warrior as expected, but forced to walk the path of a [Psychokinetic].
With Spawn infested oceans, pirates looking to plunder, and mysterious monsters that lurk within Bubbled-Cites at the bottom of the ocean. Safety is anything but guaranteed.
She’ll learn to trip; levitate, throw objects, eyeball pulling, all the way to the apex of psychic powers.
But, what happens when she discovers that her world was a lot larger than she–and the rest of humanity, once thought?
[Psychokinetic] Eyeball Pulling is a laid back story about a young girl who has a craving for adventure and fighting. She wasn't expecting to awaken as a mage class, but that won't stop her from having fun—no—It only makes it better! No longer will she need to resort to laborious activities, including, but not limited to; picking up stuff, carrying stuff, or even throwing stuff! Everything can be done with her mind!
This is the first serious litRPG I am writing, and I am considered a new author. So please be kind!
What to expect from this story:
- LitRPG elements with blue boxes
- A mischievous, powerful female protagonist
- Gore, eyeball pulling, and limb pulling.
- Slice of life elements with a party of (hopefully) interesting and fun characters
- Average chapter length 1800-2200 with a release of Mon-Fri
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/57422/psychokinetic-eyeball-pulling-a-post-apocalyptic
- Chapter 147 – Ape KingJul 5, 2023
- Chapter 146 – The Oculus Witch’s EntranceMay 25, 2023
- Chapter 145 – Monarch Altering FungusMay 25, 2023
- Chapter 144 – Battle of the DomainsMay 25, 2023
- Chapter 143 – Blinking RepostitionMay 22, 2023
- Chapter 142 – Berserking Demon EntMay 22, 2023
- Chapter 141 – Ice BloodMay 22, 2023
- Chapter 140 – The Coldness of a Born AssassinMay 3, 2023
- Chapter 139 – Eyeball ExtractionMay 3, 2023
- Chapter 138 – Skill SelectionMay 3, 2023
- Chapter 137 – Level 100 Class EvolutionMay 3, 2023
- Chapter 136 – The Final Battle to AdvancementMar 20, 2023
- Chapter 135 – Skill EvolutionsMar 20, 2023
- Chapter 134 – Murder Fluffs and ZombiesMar 20, 2023
- Chapter 133 – Unbreakable WallsMar 16, 2023
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Hiatus - Updated Jul 5, 2023
Last updated 5 months ago
- 1295 reading
- 275 plan to read
- 33 completed
- 73 paused
- 88 dropped
It's alright, but it has a number of problems.
On the other hand the world building and overall concept were both really engaging at the beginning. Not sure where I can pin down exactly where it starts to go wrong.
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This story has a lot of potential, slowly more and more lore is revealed making you guess what happened here. All the while disguising itself in a lot of action.
This however is definitely going to be a long one as I feel that the main story is just getting started.
Ill be back when another 50 to 100 chapters are released.
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Boring and the worst part on this novel is that author didn't explain how did spawn is made? Or even introduction of background and the more worst part is that this main protagonist is too op when she is at level 4 stage 2 fighting a level 63 necromancer she win with help of noobs and the author made MC more powerful as if the story progresses will be useless and the author is not introducing the characters just saying 'I'm blah blah blah' and that's it and there is no emotion of the characters no you cannot feel anything even single digit percent of emotions of the characters as if the author is just telling by a words without emotion of this novel this novel has no potential and I ask the author why this novel has high review this story cannot even called a novel in my dictionary because this novel has no emotion even Chinese novel is gooder than this novel
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[Psychokinetic] Eyeball Pulling – A Post-Apocalyptic LitRPG share some elements with other stories. Which isn't surprise cause LitRPG, semi-Apocalyptic, and bunch of other stuff are all fun story elements. It also isn't a problem, and never will be. And in this case, they used together by the author to craft a really good story. An interesting world has been crafted and built, and I've enjoy my experience reading this story so far.
A nice healthy mix of action, mystery and depth. The story has done a great job at keeping me intrigued so far, and I hope it keep up this good quality. Astrid is great, kind of brash individual who has been thrown into an chaotic pickle. Her character is developed nicely but not all at once. Through her backstory, and interaction with new and old faces, she has become a really well developed and interesting character. Which is good, cause she is the MC. Powerset wise, psychic powers, illusions and some matter manipulation end up forming a really fun power set to kept combat interesting, and some fun out of combat uses.I'm not currently too interested in most of the side cast. Majority of them are fine, and some I do like a lot. They just need a little more development, which It looks we will be getting.I'll probably update my review once book 2 is done. Maybe... Probably just increasing it to 5 stars realistically, if just keeps the same quality or improves.
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well done. I can actually feel like I'm watching Astrid. Love those vivid descriptions.
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Really well put together and an all round amazing read so far!
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Really enjoying so far I feel it just hits different and has good pacing :)
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Still early in the story. Very fast paced action that jumps from fight to fight with a slightly crazy but still lovable protagonist. Chapters are short but but tiny. Pretty much anything not directly plot related gets skipped right over, though.
It's well written with no grammar issues to note. The characters are still just a little flat for now, but that may come out later. Likewise, the world building is interesting and fairly unique, but done sparingly.
The LitRPG system is pretty standard, and is present enough for those who love it without being overdone for those who don't.
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great novel
if you want litrpg with some humor, but not too heavily into number crunching, this is the novel for you.
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When I first start reading this novel I didn't knew I would enjoy this so much. Keep up the good work!😄😊
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