Oh no! Aizen's plan succeeded! Fortunately, Aizen succeeding with his plan was part of Yuna's plan all along. Unfortunately, Aizen succeeding being part of Yuna's plan was part of his plan all along. Fortunately, Aizen succeeding being...
Anyway, Yuna (The OC from my previous fic) decides to send a clone to explore a mysterious portal; however, things turn out rather badly due to the interruption of a certain famous someone, and her adventure doesn't start how she wanted to... Oh well, at least she has her little brother and one of her wives with her.
I will try to write this in a way that even people who don't know Naruto, Bleach, and my previous fic will understand what is going on, but they will undoubtedly not understand some jokes and references.
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I came late to the party for her naruto fanfic. But I'm here now for Bleach! I can't wait to see where this series goes. For those of you newcomers, I'd reccomend you check out her naruto fanfic before starting this series as they both have the same protagonists, just at different points in their journeys. Expect to see a lot of s*x jokes and a lot of action.
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This is the sequel to the best Naruto fanfic ever, and I do mean THE BEST. Are there any words I need to say further than that?
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I mean, I know I said you probably won't see me much in this series because I'm not as invested in bleach but... it's still your series and not bleach, you know? I have trust I'll enjoy it.
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Imagine I typed the entire lyrics of 'Never Gonna Give You Up' by 'Rick Astley'. Welcome to the modern worldSeriously though, it's a great start, I'll maybe-possibly-don't-quote-me-on-it change this review another time.
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Similar to it's prequel in that it is one of the most enjoyable reading experiences I've had. It's something I look forward to each week. If you haven't read the prequel read that first.
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An amazing sequel to the absurd and hilarious Goddess of Ice. New jokes, old jokes, more sanity shattering, and so many more women (even with as hard as Hinayana tries). If this is your first book from Maerry, go read the prequel first, you will enjoy this one even more after reading it!
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loving the story so far, I believe the quality has stayed consistent with your other novel and hope you can keep it up with the rest of the novel.
Reading the previous novel is not necessary to understanding this novel but I would highly recommend it as it will help a lot in understanding Yuna and the others from the first novel.
There are only twenty chapters as I am writing this but the chapters are very large so there is plenty to read and you dont have to worry about the slower updating speed compared to her previous novel because of the larger chapter size. I had no trouble understanding the plot and I have not watched bleach for a long time witch I believe maerry has done an excellent job with.
thank you for writing this amazing novel Maerry
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This novel is in desperate need of an editor. Compared to the last novel, there are way more typos, or rather, flat out wrong words. Like using the word "thought" instead of "though". Or "extravagating" (not sure this is even a word) instead of "exaggerating".
Another example was the sentence "You are quiet, though." Not sure how the author managed to screw that up so badly, What she MEANT to write was "You are quite tough." Not only does she constantly use the wrong words, she seems to add random commas into sentences. Definitely in need of an editor. Someone who can proof read her work and fix all the, honestly, lazy mistakes she doesn't check before publishing. Also, they're called FACTIONS! NOT FRACTIONS!
Secondly, Yuna seems to be getting pushed back more and more as the main character while Naruto is being pulled forward. He's pretty much Yuna but in male form since the author has made him pretty much a carbon copy of her, so it's like he's being inserted into the scenes that Yuna should have.
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I’ve never seen anything of Bleach, which means that, compared the last series, I have even less knowledge on the source material. Regardless, I still find everything about this enjoyable. Even if you’re like me, and despise harem stories with a passion, you’ll probably enjoy anything with Yuna in it, since this series leans more towards “there’s characters with/in a harem” rather than “there’s a harem with characters”, if that makes any sense.
Side Note: The only things I know about Naruto are the occasional meme and the things I had looked up while reading the previous story to find out what a character looked like or what a term meant. I didn’t even know what Bleach’s logo looked like before reading this.
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