Rinaldo, of the Luminous Knights, is known far and wide as a brilliant swordsman who can cause injury or death with a glance.
Despite being feared as “Evil-Eye Rinaldo”, he is actually a normal person with no special skills or power.
To avoid an arranged marriage with his arrogant and self-indulgent cousin, he proposes to Olivia, the emperor’s stewardess.
This is the story of a socially awkward man who becomes the strongest knight by mistake and a woman who gets pulled from the role of a mob character into a protagonist by a twist of fate.
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Cover art by Elran.
Erys has really set the bar for Fantasy on this site, she has demonstrated excellent character growth, world building, and conflict in the chapters she has written.
The story's flow feels natural and moves at a steady pace, the author really knows how to balance tension in the story.
Outside the antagonists (the literal bodies without organs), the characters are organic and feel like they could be real people. Especially Rinaldo the main character.
Overall, the author is creating a wonderful story that is only getting better as it develops. I am highly looking forward to how the story progresses. So go read it, you won't regret it.
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There are many things I like about this story. The characters are consistent, Rinaldo's voice is consistent, and he describes nearly everything the same way throughout the story. The story goes into detail on some points in the story, touches on supernatural creatures (brief description), and the dialogue is fairly consistent and representative of each character. A lot of work and thought went into the nuanced details that can be found in many chapters of the story, including the one about "alchemy" in later chapters. Taking inspiration, attention is paid to the details of previous myths. There are also some twists about who you expect to be the good guys and who the bad guys, but there's a logical explanation behind them. Truly one of the stories of all time.
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I found this story in number 1 trending today and couldn't stop reading! I love how the author presents different perspectives and details on the characters. Now that I've found something I like, I'm looking forward to see how their relationship develops in the future. Thanks to the author for writing! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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I never read anything like this on SH! The story is interesting and seem very well written. My only complaint is that the pacing was a little rushed after the first interlude, but it was a good overall experience.
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I started reading it because it's on trending, and it looks like it's going to be a pretty cool story so far. It's pretty well written for Scribble Hub standards and unlike most new novels on here, it actually has a plot and I had no problems with the grammar: the novel was easy to read. 21 chapters in, and the story seems very interesting so far. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
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