This is essentially a Gary Stu story. Already after only 3 chapter you can already feel that the MC will be the best at everything, that everybody will praise him and love him. And all of that without putting in any effort.

In chapter 3 he supposedly train for 2 whole weeks and is already able to take on S-rank monster not only does it immediatly kill any tension but we also see none of that we are just supposed to believe that it was that easy.

The author hasn't bothered giving the MC a past. Probably because it was too much work or was too hard and as a result the MC feels very bland aka generic isekai MC. Hell I would argue that he is even bellow that since most generic isekai MC at least have a past.

The only interesting part was his magic but the author immediatly botched it. Using his magic to make clothes using plant is fine however the clothes that he managed to make require specific plant and not just the first random tree that you come across. For gods sake he made a wooden bench out of dirt. Explain that to me. I even googled it in order to make sure that no it was not me being stupid and it is indeed impossible. You know that feeling when you come across something so stupid that you start doubting yourself.

Just go read something else. There are so many stories that you are bound to find something better.

Sucks for Fairy tail fanfiction though there aren't that many of them.

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Drozeros

Status: chapter 37

Sep 7, 2022

Love the story man... It takes it time but does not leave any plotholes...

Great job author

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Lynxfury

Status: chapter 84

Jul 14, 2023

I would say this is a better than average, but not top tier, story in the 3.5-4 star range of the OP wish fulfillment genre. Most of it's flaws are the kind that come from the author likely not having English as their primary language and the occasional word bloat in chapters, likely to meet some kind of chapter length quota.

With a good editor to go through it, I would say it has the potential to possibly even reach 4.5 stars. (This is of course depending on your personal opinions on topics like OP characters and wish fulfillment stories. I don't take stars away for these things so long as it's obvious that's what I'll be reading before I start. I try to judge each story within their own genre.)

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