I would have give the author a 5 star rating if only the MC stop being in the school and graduate early because I feel like the author can expand the world of mha better than being trap in this hero school. I really really like how the author truly understand how his character works, like he can make a MC that is an asshole without trying to make him likeable, honestly a breathe of fresh air. I would like if the author time skip more often as the mha school life is too stale, the faster the MC gets to be an adult the better it is for the story (so he could explore other things that doesnt being touch in mha, like what is going on outside japan, what happen if there's war between two super heroes society country, is the heroes weaponized in the war or some sh*t.).

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LinkedWorlds

Status: c102 (i read ahead on...

Nov 2, 2022

The grammar as far as I can tell, is the best I have seen on this website. This is also the best story I have read on here (though I only started looking through this site last week), and the MC is better than you and he knows it.

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SolariumOnTheMoon

Status: chapter 063(life as horizon)

Oct 23, 2022

Very few grammar errors, MC knows his own self worth, cool powers. 5 stars

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_Jack_Walten_

Status: chapter 058(peerless)

Oct 13, 2022

Currently at the end of Volume 3, this story is a beautiful work of fanfiction. Using an already existing world and plot line I know well, Keanu_Eugene managed to turn it into a new light of story and ideas. Our main, Law Matini (aka Horizon), is a very technical person who lacks social skills. Being both a weapons master and have a quirk called Hand of God, he will reshape our view on this world and how it works. For example; I never thought about the backfires of OFA in Midorya, and how he repeatedly broke his arms, and how that could affect his nerves and he might get paralyzed.

TLDR; Long review short, read this masterpiece. The character view is great.

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TheCrazySnipper

Status: chapter 255(global test)

Oct 13, 2023

I really enjoy reading this fanfic, the beginning is a bit rough and edgy but I believe it was needed to proved a clear understanding of his character and give room for him to improve or change in the future. I like his powers they are clearly powerful but in most fights it isn't completely one sided. I like the suspense in certain chapters and look forward to see how you will handle the next arc!

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Keanu_Eugene

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