I'm caught up right now so I thought why not give my feedback concerning the novel.

Ive been reading this for a while I'd like to start this off by saying that the intro is phenomenal for a fanfiction, not something you would usually expect from a one piece novel.

I wanna keep this review short tbh, after reading over 100 chapters, what I can't help but notice is that the environment feels way too limited as in it has been the same few characters the MC has been interacting with so far since the start and has been going back n forth between the same few islands. Not to mention being reminded about already established information too many times like characters personalities or how they would act n such.

The next issue would be the fact that the writing style feels more like a literal journal reciting the events that are happening. Literally. It is probably because of the daily release schedule that results in a continuous drop in quality.

I liked the novel at first but now it's a 3/5 at best tbh.

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Binge read this today. Its a whole another level, not even comparable to other fanfic. It didn't rewrite all the canon story all over again, with some minor cliche/twist like most fanfic. Definitely 'original' unique perspective, story has enticing mystery on it and bigger goal. Its fun. Happy to receive all webnovel migration to this site. While webnovel 'infinite scroll' was good, sadly they abandoned their pc users.

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dis is the good sh*t right there, webnovel is bad.

This is an amazing story, for those who are new to VeganMaster, you're in for a trip.

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Ty for moving from webnovel, lets enjoy our new home

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Started from webnovel and I am glad it is also posted here.

Amazing story and well thought character. I quite like Enel's interactions with the other characters and can't wait to read more!

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Fun story to read. A good fan fiction, up there with some of the better written ones, particularly because it doesn't just follow the main characters and storyline but also doesn't ignore them and the original plot completely too. 

World building is good, new characters are made, while the original cast is written fairly accurately from what I can tell? Enel seems to have Luffy's ability to befriend everyone which is a curious yet understandable choice. 

Enel isn't immediately op (OK he is, but he grows a lot). But the really good part is that other characters are actually allowed to have more talent than him in some areas. And he works with others, not just doing it all himself. 

From the looks of it the writer seems to have an idea of what he wants the story to end with, with some guesses made as to how some characters act and function. Not always accurate but he roles with what he has written, because it is a fan fiction, so fair enough. 

Anyway, good fan fiction, I'm glad I read it and will continue reading it.

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Author I follow you from Webnovel (Already died), this is an excellent fanfic 👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍

Are you going to upload the rest of your novels here?😁

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I think this deservs a better rating, best one piece fanfic on scribble hub.

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• Story is good so far, However there are some things that need to be improved.

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   Enel Gaining Conq Haki could have been done better. What do I mean by that is Enel using Conq haki but then runs into a forced nerf, Were he suddenly has no soul according to Linlin in chapter 50-51. Which in fact was a contradiction because in chapter 2 specifically, Which I'm going to quote the sentence. 

2. "Enjoy your new life, kind soul." The god then released Alexander. Alexander could feel another pull, this time his soul was actually pulled out of his body, he could see his body left behind, being once again grabbed by the god that was getting farther and farther away.
   
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