Thrown into a world of death and misery, laziness is not an option. Well, that’s what a guy with a golden finger would say. Whoever sent me into this new world forgot to give me my system, and decided to mess with my meta knowledge, for kicks I guess…
Minato Alive, Kushina Alive, Uchiha Alive, OC MC
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finally a female MC power fantasy that isn't all about drama and romance! If I had to read another awful harem with writers who don't know how to do dialogue I wouldve lost it, thankfully this exists
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I'm not good with review, but here my impression of the story so far.
It has a nice flow, not too fast nor slow.
Introduce a new summon that I find more suitable for the shinobi world intead of the classic one.
The novel offer an intreasting and different point of view in what could be the shinobi world.
The MC beeing not too OP, so far, make enjoiable the various situation she find hereself in.
All in all a good and well written novel.
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Honestly It started out very good. 5 Stars.
However near the end everything felt so forced.
She suddenly had to kill everyone she cared about.
Why?
Because they thought she was a power hungry monster despite trying to turn down positions of power since the begginning of the story and they knew that but apparently either ignored it or convinently forgot.
Why would the author do this?
To make a point about how "Ruling is about whats best for the people no matter the sacrifices.
It's stupid and makes no sense.
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Very good story, not perfect but good anyway, the author has been very original with the story and although I didn't like everything, I value the originality of the author not only at the beginning but also during the course of the story and how MC influences the world the finale/the final battle (if the author decides not to take the second stop) has left a bitter taste in my mouth, it leaves me a little sad.
PS: the fact that I don't like the final battle is something personal, there are many people who have liked it, (what happens is that I'm a bit sentimental) Hopefully the author decides to upload the 2nd part. I have read the 165 ch in a row
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This is a good story but barely a Naruto fanfic. The AU is confusing with random details different. There are like three extras forms of power. Like bending?! Why's that even there? At some point it seemingly just turns into a cultivation novel. The stuff with the spirits is super weird. There some weird fourth wall breaks occasionally and the MC has some funny thoughts about her situation. Like she will be like "I can't train 24/7 I'm not a machine" and then go onto a three month montage of straight training that with her mind sped up is like 10 times as long. Or she will talk about how in fanfics the MC is way too OP at a young age and then at 7 be at the top of ANBU. Also she seems to be able to do things very easily but not anything revolutionary like the other characters just don't emulate her for no reason.
Well I liked this story till I didn't but it was enjoyable none the less.
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I would recommend this book to anyone that loves the Naruto verse. It was a great read from start to finish. I hope the author makes a second book or continues this story. The only thing is this fanfic does take a lot of liberty with certain concepts in Naruto, which is very interesting and is explained in a way that makes sense and thus makes it feel like its own story and not Naruto with a random OP character inserted into it. Thanks for a great read author, well wishes!
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I am freaking waiting for you to write PART 2 AND PLZ for gods sake DO. NOT. DROP. IT. DO. NOT. DROP. IT. DO. NOT. DROP. IT. (Imp things must be said three times) it really leaves a bad taste because of the last fight and how the ppl close to her seem to misunderstand her (well that what makes the story interesting tho) I just hope shishui and itachi do not disappoint her (and ME TOO) tbh I really don't like NARUTOs character, well even from the og anime too, I freaking wanted to heck him when he was talking to jiraiya after the fight.
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Started out great, got better, the end is a little lacking. Overall very good fanfic with lots of cool, well thought out AU-elements.
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First I must mention the novel is finished even though author forgot to change ongoing status to completed tag.
Moving on to review.
Story is excellent! Not sticking to canon is one reason but how the story plot goes on is the biggest reason for me to like it! Hopefully you can like it too. Lots of nice things going on including the Sage thing.
The story is so original and it's even better than original Naruto. The MC affects the world so much it changed a lot. The ending is amazing and a little sad too. Not going to say more to not to ruin experience of anyone who wants to read it. YOU WILL NOT REGRET READING THIS!
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