The novel is slow, repetitive, and downright frustrating at times, but the author has a way of grabbing your emotions and putting it on a rollercoaster. Sometimes its extremely funny and then there are moments that made me feel like crying. 

So far, I think this novel is a brilliant piece of work that just needs a tiny bit of editing and I would recommend it if you are looking for an R18 harem comedy with bits of drama here and there. The only thing I wish is for there to be pictures of the characters with labels so I don't have to keep opening tabs to search their names.

PS: I think the author really hates Sorata Kanda but I kinda understand why.

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So far (CH 80) it's not good, I think the MC is the worst Gary Stu (male Mary Sue) I've seen. His cheat system is too much and requires no effort, considering it's called the scumbag system you would assume he needs to actually do something scummy, but no, just seeing a capture target girl gives him restaurants, real estate, investments, or a billion yen directly to his bank account, he does get extra for actually doing something of course. 

These properties he gets also come with a trusty manager, so MC really doesn't need to do anything. I feel like even though he's a billionaire while doing nothing other than living his life, he COULD be forgiven but he also gets knowledge and skills downloaded into his head, so he's top of school, master chef, master artist, master martial artist, etc... these skills also have a skill bonus so anyone that, say, follows his recipe cannot make the dish as well as he can since he has a system buff.

Even the xianxia protagonists need to at least train or fall into a ditch for their cheats, so they do expand SOME effort.

Just something to add, there is a huge number of characters (mostly female) from many different animes, I have not watched many of them, so I keep tabs on the picture of the character for reference to remember who's who.

I do plan on continuing reading and will update my review accordingly since most other reviews ARE positive and say it gets much better.

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It's horrid. Absolutely everything is dictated by the narrator in the most matter-of-fact tone, there is no suspense and there is no difficulty or conflict. It's the sort of writing one would expect from a middle-schooler: And then, and then, and then; He had to admit, she had to admit, He had to admit.... Every other sentence is a character directly stating their feelings as if each character has perfect self-understanding, or "having to admit" some opinion of the author as if it were a globally accepted fact. Adverbs like "suddenly" are so abundant that one begins to think nothing happens in this world except that it is quick, and unexpected. English is clearly not the first language of the author, something for which he can be easily forgiven. What he cannot be easily forgiven is the clear unwillingness to sit down with one of the classics and examine what constitutes good writing. I suggest Hemingway--since the author clearly references him at least once and "The Old Man and the Sea" is about as simply written as it is possible to be. The lack of any artifice and skill can be ignored for the first few chapters. There are over 500 and as of chapter 128, no sign of improvement. It has gone well past the point of naivete and reached masturbation and I wouldn't recommend anybody read this. 

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I stopped when I read 300 chapters because I realized that there was nothing more to look for in this work. (and also because I was too sick to try to find a better piece)

There are several cons that exist throughout history. Some of which could be turned into pluses in capable hands, but the author is not good enough for this.

1 Main character system.

It is unnecessarily strong, unnecessarily limited, and its existence is completely contrived and does not make sense.

If you see a girl, get a reward that would be enough for any reasonable person to live comfortably until his old age.

The system only works on characters from other stories. The author immediately gave himself an excuse not to introduce his own characters into the work.

The system exists only because the author said that it should exist.

2 Plot

Starting with the fact that he does not exist, and ending with the fact that without a plot, the characters are too insipid.

Everyday life is quite a good genre, but... 300 chapters describe how many do you think? year? half a year? a couple of months? No. Doesn't even describe 2 weeks. Moreover, the narrative is filled with many similar events, despite the fact that many unique events are described in one sentence.

And the ecchi genre is not able to justify this, I have seen good works of this genre and this one is not even in the top 10, although I have seen no more than 20 of them.

And the events... Damn it. If the author had played the chuunibyou card well, then many events would not have been a disappointment. For example, both matches are in the underground arena.

If an instant victory in the first match can still be explained by a reluctance to fight, then in the second it cannot, since he simply made an instant victory like an idiot and could not get into the head of the public that he should not be challenged to fight.

3 Romance

After a certain moment, it becomes clear that the author is able to imagine only 1 type of romantic relationship: GG attracts a girl with his existence, the girl boils in her feelings for a while, the girl confesses to him, he tells her that he is a scumbag and meets a bunch of girls and sends her to think, they meet again and begin a relationship.

But the saddest thing is that due to the fact that the entire romantic component during s*x is excluded, then all the girls who have s*xual relations with him immediately reduce their presence in the novel, since the author believes that the GG relationship with the girl can be described as follows : The girl lost her virginity with GG (I threw this work as soon as I saw such an abomination).

Some might say that there are relationships that differ from this. Yes, but they are all at the very beginning before Sorata leaves the dorm. There is no point in reading this work beyond this point, since it turns from a 4-star one into simple garbage.

... Honestly, I could still find a few negatives if I wanted to, but I'm tired of this piece. In the end, the only thing that kept me after the end of the arc of accepting a new life was the possible plot of the corruption of the protagonist, but after observing the skill of the author for some time, I realized that even if the author thinks of this development, he is unlikely to be able to present it in the proper form.

What about the benefits of the piece? ahahah They ended together with the end of the 1st arc (departure from the hostel of the character "Sorata" + acceptance of a new life by the main character). Such a difference in quality really makes you wonder if this work is written by the same author who started it.

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I picked this up yesterday, and just stopped in the middle of chap. 57. It get 2 stars since I missed the 1 star.

The pacing of this novel is terrible. Almost 60 chapters in, and maybe 4 or 5 days have passed? I don't know because there is so much filler that it's impossible to know how much time has passed. 

How much filler you ask? Well I just read 5 or 6 chapters all dedicated to a fish dinner. 1 just to make it, 1 just for how good it smells, 1 maybe 2 on how it tastes. 1 on how such a young man could be so accomplished in cooking, along with how rude someone was to ask how they made it. And all of it was to welcome a possible love interest, who maybe spoke twice. 

I may have held on, because I thought this was a new Author, but nope. They have a dedicated following from previous stories, and 1 review for 300 chapters in says it's been only 2 weeks in the time line. So the writing and pacing won't improve.

Every interaction between characters is so weighed down by unnecessary detail. Every conversation with MC is someone talks, 2 paragraphs on how each person feels about what they said, next person talks, another 2 paragraphs. And that's only if their are 2 people. Each person will get their own dedicated paragraph as to how they process each persons words. 

So In all honesty, I read maybe 7 chapters of actual story, and 50 filler. 

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yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees I love the works of this author

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I'm not used to writing reviews but it's always good to start somewhere.

The novel is great, obviously it is a novel with a great harem in which the protagonist wins everything, the type of novel where the protagonist does not have difficulties and has no drama, a lighter type, more to relax. 

Only sin of this novel is skipping 95% of the smut scenes. At the beginning there is a more boring part of the protagonist in conflict with being or not being a scumbag but it is still interesting to read even more the parts with the shiina and the development of the protagonist in relation to the system and relationships. 

One of the funniest things is the hatred that the author has for sorata (I don't judge, I completely agree, completely justified).

 The novel, even with so many relationships, is not boring, some characters end up having parts with less screen time but they come back in other parts and so on, there is a mixture with animes like baki and kegan ashura but it is not so much bullsh*t. 

 In general I think it's a great novel and I would give it 5 stars if it weren't for skipping parts of smut.

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I've read this novel or fanfic until this chapter and I want to say something, this is one of the best fanfics or novel that I have ever read in my life, congratulations for this master piece and I hope you keep posting more episodes because I love this fic (Novel).

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I'm not much of a harem fan, but even with the tremendous number of women, it still makes you fall in love with each one, one of my favorite fics without a doubt, I wish the fic would never end, and I would like 10 daily chapters hahahaha

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TBH I really like this, of course some people out there would probably say that he's too OP or that he is too much of a scumbag but IMO I dont really care, there are a lot of story's out there where MC has to grind and sh*t, so having this story where the MC is really op without training for years makes it somehow more fun to read, of course there are alot more things that makes this fanfic interesting like how there are different characters from different novels or how the MC would solve the problem of having a harem in modern society also there is alot of mystery surrounding the MC and as we progress through the story we get to see more and more regarding him, there is also the strongest human in his world that he still cant defeat so im really looking forward to see how he will deal with that.

Overall this one is in my top 5 for sure, Author keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to the next chapters!!

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