The Story was going good at first 15 chapter but then the MC staring thinking with his d**k instead of his brain And I was thinking this is going to be Juvia only fanfiction guess I was wrong. Sad very sad but author please put harem tag in the novel So I don't have to waste my time reading this garbage
The author's use of this incredibly OP power is terrible. As in the author writes the MC setting up failure rules in one chapter, then a couple of chapters later has the MC in a situation that those rules should have prevented, and sets up new rules specific to that situation, AND THEN has something happen that both sets of rules should have prevented. The author can neither understand the basics of their own MC's main power nor remember what they have already written in the previous chapter.
The MC outright states right at the start that they give everyone with bad intentions towards them a 100% failure rate in causing him harm, or even detecting him unless he explicitly allows them to detect him. Later, MC sets up new 100% failure rules "This is important for future battles and no one would allow me to set up multiple defenses using Failure Manipulation in the middle of the fight." as if the rules established at the start don't exist?
A few chapters later, he makes rules that the people in the building he just left have a 100% failure rate of remembering or recording the appearance of himself and his companion. In the very same chapter the MC notes that they nearly got caught by one of the people he interacted with in that building who was looking for them, and they only just avoided that person. How is that possible when no one in the building was allowed to remember or record the MC's appearance? Shouldn't matter if the MC walks right past anyone from that building, they'd have no idea who he is.
It's a very interesting premise but the whole thing needs rewriting from scratch, with the author actually bothering to put in some effort to defining rules for how this power works and keeping track of what rules the MC has established. As things stand it's an incoherent mess that's impossible to follow.
I, Asahi, was just a filthy rich young master who died?
But why I am following the plotline of a third rate novel? Why is this Goddess named Cliche?
And wait, this doesn’t end there. I’m also getting this great system for
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very dark to be a fairy tail fanfic, it started well but then it became one more hentai harem
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The Story was going good at first 15 chapter but then the MC staring thinking with his d**k instead of his brain And I was thinking this is going to be Juvia only fanfiction guess I was wrong. Sad very sad but author please put harem tag in the novel So I don't have to waste my time reading this garbage
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The author's use of this incredibly OP power is terrible. As in the author writes the MC setting up failure rules in one chapter, then a couple of chapters later has the MC in a situation that those rules should have prevented, and sets up new rules specific to that situation, AND THEN has something happen that both sets of rules should have prevented. The author can neither understand the basics of their own MC's main power nor remember what they have already written in the previous chapter.
The MC outright states right at the start that they give everyone with bad intentions towards them a 100% failure rate in causing him harm, or even detecting him unless he explicitly allows them to detect him. Later, MC sets up new 100% failure rules "This is important for future battles and no one would allow me to set up multiple defenses using Failure Manipulation in the middle of the fight." as if the rules established at the start don't exist?
A few chapters later, he makes rules that the people in the building he just left have a 100% failure rate of remembering or recording the appearance of himself and his companion. In the very same chapter the MC notes that they nearly got caught by one of the people he interacted with in that building who was looking for them, and they only just avoided that person. How is that possible when no one in the building was allowed to remember or record the MC's appearance? Shouldn't matter if the MC walks right past anyone from that building, they'd have no idea who he is.
It's a very interesting premise but the whole thing needs rewriting from scratch, with the author actually bothering to put in some effort to defining rules for how this power works and keeping track of what rules the MC has established. As things stand it's an incoherent mess that's impossible to follow.
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