While the grammar is good and the plot armor can be understood his casanova skills can not. First the fact that he beat up the brother of the girl in front of her and then when he smiled she blushed is stupid. There are other example like this. The fact that he gains almost 30 skills's levels fighting a random level one is unrealistic. Same for basically all the level he gains afterwards. Making it easy to level skills is a thing, ut here it's just absurd. The way the author is trying to make the characters look "perceptive", "smart", "cunning" etc. Is by making them mind readers. I understand it's hard to do for a new writer especially if you, thank god, don't try by making all the others dumb as f**k, but here it's exaggerated in opposite direction.
It's your typical popular IP turned cultivation novel with a sociopathic MC. If that's your cup of tea, it's pretty decent for what it is. Don't expect much in terms of characters or development. As I said earlier, cultivation. MC gets everything on a silver platter, no hardships nor character growth on his side, some growth on side characters, but that's only so they will sleep with MC.
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Hashirama Senju, the God of Shinobi, the Wood Deity, was a legend in the Naruto World. But what if with that exact limitless power on his fingertips, an average man with questionable pa
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A young man with a questionable job dies, eaten by a shark. To his surprise, afterlife was a spinning roulette that decided his next world and powers, with an annoyed Goddess supervising the pro
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[Please note: This fan fiction follows the LIGHT NOVELS and NOT the ANIME.]
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[Author’s Note at the end]
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A group of rookie adventurers enter an ancient tomb in the hopes finding treasure
Within they found something priceless but it is not something they expected
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(A/N: Doing for fun, And this one turned one of my favorites to work on,
While the grammar is good and the plot armor can be understood his casanova skills can not. First the fact that he beat up the brother of the girl in front of her and then when he smiled she blushed is stupid. There are other example like this. The fact that he gains almost 30 skills's levels fighting a random level one is unrealistic. Same for basically all the level he gains afterwards. Making it easy to level skills is a thing, ut here it's just absurd. The way the author is trying to make the characters look "perceptive", "smart", "cunning" etc. Is by making them mind readers. I understand it's hard to do for a new writer especially if you, thank god, don't try by making all the others dumb as f**k, but here it's exaggerated in opposite direction.
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It's your typical popular IP turned cultivation novel with a sociopathic MC. If that's your cup of tea, it's pretty decent for what it is. Don't expect much in terms of characters or development. As I said earlier, cultivation. MC gets everything on a silver platter, no hardships nor character growth on his side, some growth on side characters, but that's only so they will sleep with MC.
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