While the grammar is good and the plot armor can be understood his casanova skills can not. First the fact that he beat up the brother of the girl in front of her and then when he smiled she blushed is stupid. There are other example like this. The fact that he gains almost 30 skills's levels fighting a random level one is unrealistic. Same for basically all the level he gains afterwards. Making it easy to level skills is a thing,   ut here it's just absurd. The way the author is trying to make the characters look "perceptive", "smart", "cunning" etc. Is by making them mind readers. I understand it's hard to do for a new writer especially if you, thank god, don't try by making all the others dumb as f**k, but here it's exaggerated in opposite direction.

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