Good grammer, but the m.c is like someone with aspergers, or some mental condition that makes him emotionally stunted. This starts as a reincarnation novel, but the m.c eventually turns into just another 11 year old child with 0 maturity by the time he gets on the hogwarts express. He also has somehow lost nearly all memory of Harry Potter to the point where we have no clue what he actually knew of original story. So in conclusion, the entire reincarnation premise this book is based on is meaningless it adds nothing of substance at all. This is also false advertising to be tagged as such, because 1 he isn't anymore mature than any other 11 year old, neither does he make any use of his past lives memories in any fashion beyond having an easy time in grade school. The chapters are also incredibly short. I'm talking just 4-5 paragraphs long. This book could easily have been written without being a reincarnation book and nothing would change at all.

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Jovorical

Status: chapter 36: its alive!

Mar 29, 2023

I love this book he got Luna just right maybe a little vindictive. But still awesome. And the main characters obliviousness to his magic. It's just great especially the interactions between Luna and him.

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Halkdo

Status: c25

Oct 7, 2022

For a first time author, its really good! The author is trying to do something new with existing characters or old ones. Im enjoying the story so far.

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LilBreh

Status: chapter 19 – magical books and interpretations

Sep 11, 2022

It ain't bad so far. When I first saw the title, I thought this was a lovecraftian novel, but alas. I wouldn't say it's very accurate. As the title is misleading and because I prefer the MC being a rebellious dud, I lowered the score to 4 stars. If romance appears, 3.5 stars.

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Vesapod

Status: chapter 7 – do i look like...

Sep 12, 2024

This may be early for a review, but goddammit this is one of the most down to earth starts that actually takes itself seriously.

The Author chose an archetype and set a tone, but most importantly is sticking with it.

After aimlessly searching I've finally found something that doesn't scale the entirety of the rainbow 5x over, or be painfully tone deaf.

Basically this is a coherent fanfic, and having both 'Coherent' and 'fanfic' in the same sentence is fundamentaly nigh impossible to find when your actively searching for it.

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Briai

Status: chapter 40

Jun 17, 2023

I was enjoying this! I want more! (Found today). The main character seems to have a lack of time perspective, I love how unconcerned he is.

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